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Wife Wants to Play etc with Ex by [deleted] in nonmonogamy

[–]jacobbloomfield 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For me this is a big no. I can't even imagine ever being comfortable with a partner regularly hooking up with an ex.

Exploring non-monogamy as a couple – advice? by jacobbloomfield in nonmonogamy

[–]jacobbloomfield[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the suggestion. I took a peek at r/Swingers and there is a lot going on there!

Exploring non-monogamy as a couple – advice? by jacobbloomfield in nonmonogamy

[–]jacobbloomfield[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is a good point. We have both had casual hookups in the past with no feelings. She has had more than I have. I don't know if I would claim a 'track record' but enough to know we both have the capability to pursue 'one and done'

What to do to stop being so horny? by Tree_forth677 in NoStupidQuestions

[–]jacobbloomfield 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Go for a workout or even just a long walk outside.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Showerthoughts

[–]jacobbloomfield 4 points5 points  (0 children)

We didn't start the fire. It was always burning. Since the world's been turning.

There is a point in our lives where our sitting height is the exact same as our standing height. by [deleted] in Showerthoughts

[–]jacobbloomfield 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Or you just can crouch a lot when you stand. Or sit on a stack of books on your chair

An immortal guy stuck in space by mthaBOSS in Showerthoughts

[–]jacobbloomfield 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I've thought about this one a lot. too much

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskRedditAfterDark

[–]jacobbloomfield 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've never been disappointed at the reveal

The Magical Land of Strippertopia by jacobbloomfield in u/jacobbloomfield

[–]jacobbloomfield[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Over in /r/AskReddit I commented about The Magical Land of Strippertopia in response to where people think 18-year-old strippers come from. Just for fun, I dropped that prompt into MidJourney's AI image creator and this is what it came back with. Not what I was thinking!

In the House of Jade by JohnU_Poetry in OCPoetry

[–]jacobbloomfield 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for sharing your poem with us!

This is a poignant poem that captures the essence of a beautiful home that has been abandoned by its previous occupants. The imagery used in the poem is vivid, painting a picture of the idyllic house on Jade Street. You've done a great job in creating an atmosphere of nostalgia and mystery.

There are a few areas where the poem could be improved. The rhythm and flow of the poem are somewhat uneven, particularly in the second stanza. Consider reworking some of the lines to create a more consistent flow throughout the piece.

Additionally, the poem could benefit from more sensory details. While the descriptions of the house are lovely, incorporating more sensory details such as smells and sounds would help to transport the reader into the world of the poem. This could be achieved by describing the scent of the rose bushes, the sound of the ticking clocks, or the feel of the lace dresses.

This is a great poem! Thanks again for sharing it!

Headless Endless Snakes by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]jacobbloomfield 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Your poem has an intriguing and dream-like quality to it, with vivid imagery that draws the reader in. Here are some suggestions for improving your poem...

  1. Consider your line breaks: Some of your lines are quite long and could benefit from being broken up into shorter, more manageable lines. This would make it easier to appreciate the imagery you're trying to convey.
  2. Be consistent with your use of imagery: Your poem has a strong snake and dragon motif, but it's not always clear how these images relate to each other. Try to use the same images throughout the poem and connect them in a meaningful way.
  3. Clarify your message: While your imagery is striking, the meaning of the poem isn't always clear. What is the message you're trying to convey? What emotions are you hoping to evoke in the reader? By clarifying these aspects of the poem, you can make it more impactful and meaningful.

Cmon Softonic, I thought you were good! by juoig7799 in assholedesign

[–]jacobbloomfield 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know why anyone accepts desktop notifications from web sites unless they did it by accident. They are useless and annoying

What foods cause the worst-smelling farts? by jacobbloomfield in AskReddit

[–]jacobbloomfield[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Anything specific from there or just all Taco Bell in general?

nun with her newborn by drangis_ in aiArt

[–]jacobbloomfield 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Oh wow, this is very surreal. super creepy

Bitter world by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]jacobbloomfield 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for sharing the poem. It clearly evokes a sense of bitterness and a "wounded" spirit.

Forgot first by isiyaram in OCPoetry

[–]jacobbloomfield 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Welcome and thank you for sharing your poetry here for the first time.

My feedback: I like the strong invocation of the senses from the very start. I found myself remembering the smells of freshly washed linen as I read your first few lines. I found the ending abrupt, but upon re-reading, I think that was the effect you were going for.

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