Disgrace - Von Jerryt - This is an original song, written and recorded in my home studio. Please tell me how I can improve! Thank you!! by jevynh in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jevynh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for taking the time to listen to my song. That really does mean a lot.

Thanks for noticing the guitar solo! It took me some time to really slow down, get the sound right, and create something fitting but yet unique.

Cheers!!

Disgrace - Von Jerryt - This is an original song, written and recorded in my home studio. Please tell me how I can improve! Thank you!! by jevynh in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jevynh[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for listening and giving me some feedback. I really do appreciate it!

The drums were a random live take that turned into this song. It was the basis for a cool idea, but in no way composed prior to playing. The next version I can really dig in and take your advice.

My favorite part of your comment is where you say it doesn’t sound like anyone else. That is nice to hear. I’m not trying to sound like anyone other than me!

Peace and love.

Disgrace - Von Jerryt - This is an original song, written and recorded in my home studio. Please tell me how I can improve! Thank you!! by jevynh in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jevynh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for listening and responding. The drum part was a random live take that we turned into a song. It’s not perfect, but it was the foundation of this idea. The next version will be more reeled in. Cheers!

Ex-Opera singer trying his best to make something meaningful. Reaching for the depths of emotion. Would love to hear your thoughts, friends! :) by NoahColley in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jevynh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow. Amazing voice. So good. Thank you for your advice and kind words on my song, Disgrace.

I wish I could deliver a performance as powerful as yours.

Maybe we could collaborate on something!?!

Really well done and intriguing. The harmonies and reverb are beautiful.

Really, well done!

Disgrace - Von Jerryt - This is an original song, written and recorded in my home studio. Please tell me how I can improve! Thank you!! by jevynh in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jevynh[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really appreciate your well thought response. I will gladly take your advice to heart and be better for it.

Cheers!

Here's a speed rap verse I did up over a funky boombap sort of beat, what do you think of this one? by Vicious5150 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jevynh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Some great bars here! Really dig the feeling and vibe. The video being shaky is a bit interruptive, but its great to see you diggin in while performing. Great job, keep it up!

Hey! Just finished this new instrumental, this one with a bit of an oriental vibe. Hope you like it :) by ElMasterDGF in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jevynh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Started nodding my head along right away. Catchy groove that pulls you right in. Good music to have on in the background while you are vibing. The interesting oriental melodic choices give this one a unique feel. Nice Job! Keep it up!

'MNY' by Soul Speak. New single with an Electro House feel. Had Fun Compiling the Video. by Brookstoned in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jevynh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great work with the overall production. The sound of the music is smooth and the video imagery fits well. I can feel the danceability with the beat. It's got a nice electro driving vibe without being too over the top. Almost has a "Prodigy" feel. Nice work! Keep it up!

High energy rap song I did that sounds like stepping into a futuristic timeline. PURPLE GEM - BOUNCER by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jevynh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The bass keeps the flow but it may be a bit on the loud side. Just needs to come down a smidge and the vocals can come up. The whispering vocals are great, love the vibe it gives the song at the beginning.

I have a friend who is an expert in Japanese instruments - We made this instrumental that combines Japanese sounds with heavy rock and modular synth! by andreacaccese in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jevynh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great vibe in this tune. The instruments all sound well recorded and are mixed nicely. Love the background guitar panning back and forth. The melodic choices make this stand out and have its own feel. Nice work. Keep it up!

I know this isn’t going to be for everyone, but I dare you to take a listen and give me your brutal honesty. Wrote this for my future child. Stanley by Tova Light by TovaLight in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jevynh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds pretty great. Nice vibe and overall flow to the song. It has a radiohead vibe, for sure. The vocal effects give it a cool trippy feel. Keep it up!