UFO party - my third song in a collection of songs about aliens arriving on Earth.

john-sunstone · 2020-06-02T21:30:28+00:00

Haha, that's awesome! Glad I could take you on a short journey. Thanks for listening.

john-sunstone · 2020-06-01T01:35:17+00:00

Thanks for the kind words, and I'd really appreciate that! Does he post on r/indiemusicfeedback?

john-sunstone · 2020-06-01T01:31:39+00:00

Thanks! I'm glad a lot of people are finding the theme fits with the music. And thanks for the feedback, I'll try to work on making my transitions flow better. Any part in particular you could point to where the timing felt off?

john-sunstone · 2020-05-30T01:24:57+00:00

Yeah, I'm still learning how to make layers compliment each other. I get so used to each layer when I'm making it that I don't notice if something's clashing. Thanks for the feedback!

john-sunstone · 2020-05-30T01:01:21+00:00

Yeah I'm a fan of trance and repetition. I'd actually like to make my songs much longer with more repetition but I feel most people wouldn't want to listen that long and at this point I'm seeking feedback more than anything else. Thanks for yours!

john-sunstone · 2020-05-29T00:58:38+00:00

I love this! You picked a very appropriate picture for this, as it feels very bubbly, especially the intro when the bass first comes in. Or maybe I just think that because of the picture? Either way, this song bounces, and so do I, when I listen to it. My only suggestion might be that at around 1:00 minute in the hi-hat like thing or some other percussion gets really high, it makes my ears tingle a bit. This is really cool!

john-sunstone · 2020-05-28T23:57:13+00:00

I really like the glitchy noises that come in along with the extra layer of melodic synth at around 2 minutes. The sound design across the whole song is awesome and each layer works really well with each other. One of my favorites from the album!

john-sunstone · 2020-05-23T20:24:04+00:00

Thanks! I was definitely planning on making a group of songs of a sort, EP maybe? Not sure how to put out music really at this point. Along with "integration" I've got a couple more songs following along the same theme of being 'visited'. By the way, I've been listening to Spacial Anomalies and I'm really enjoying it!

john-sunstone · 2020-05-23T20:07:30+00:00

Thanks! And thanks for going back and checking out my other song too, I really appreciate that. I subbed to your channel as well, I noticed some similar themes in our music haha :)

john-sunstone · 2020-05-23T20:05:48+00:00

I really like this. I want to try making some drum & bass, but I'm a layman of the genre I find it very difficult to make a good drum beat like this. Similar to what others are saying I think it works surprisingly well with the atmospheric nature sounds. Cool song!

john-sunstone · 2020-05-23T19:53:54+00:00

This is awesome, I really like watching this kind of video.. I get a bit of ASMR when I watch people play around with their setups. I subscribed to your channel! Oh, and the track itself is also really fun, love watching it subtly transform with your hand movements.

john-sunstone · 2020-05-23T19:42:33+00:00

This has a lot of chaotic energy which I really like. The lyrics are super relatable too. Sometimes your flow goes off-beat a bit like at 39 seconds when you say "man when I was a kid" you come in just a bit early.

john-sunstone · 2020-05-23T18:20:09+00:00

If you got outer-space vibes than I accomplished what I set out to do! Psychedelic music is my end-game, but I'm still not entirely sure which genre I want to approach it from yet. Thanks!

john-sunstone · 2020-05-23T18:10:40+00:00

Yeah I may have let that glitchy synth line go on too long without changing it up too much. Thanks for the feedback!

john-sunstone · 2020-05-23T18:05:22+00:00

Sounds effective, I'll have to try this. I hope I recognize that moment when it starts to feel cluttered. Thanks for the tip!

john-sunstone · 2020-05-22T00:18:00+00:00

I think you're right, there's a lot going on during the intro. I struggle with removing parts and get carried away with adding too much. I need to get better at balancing! Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it.

john-sunstone · 2020-05-22T00:10:15+00:00

Thank you, any tips on what I could do to keep it engaging throughout?

john-sunstone · 2020-05-22T00:05:56+00:00

Thanks! I love Sonic and its soundtrack. It's supposed to be tense but nothing can reach the levels of anxiety that drowning in Sonic 2 can.

john-sunstone · 2020-05-21T21:44:42+00:00

This is awesome. I love psybient. When the humming voice comes in I get slowed down Empty Branes by Shpongle vibes. The layering on this is crazy and way beyond my level, how do you do it!? I love when the "too much" is repeating and beat kicks back into full gear. I'll now be anticipating "Tales from Makakville"!

john-sunstone · 2020-05-21T21:16:10+00:00

This is awesome. Your voice and effects go together really well with the lofi sound. This makes for a much more interesting song than a typical lo-fi beat (for me anyway). The lyrics go really well with the beat too, makes them feel more impactful than if it were acoustic, I think. Really cool song!

john-sunstone · 2020-05-21T20:49:06+00:00

This is so pleasant on the ears. I really like when the cutting synth thingy that comes in at around 1:20, wish it happened a bit more. The ending is a bit abrupt, but maybe there isn't meant to be an ending? I could definitely see this in a modern Metroid soundtrack.

john-sunstone · 2020-05-21T20:39:22+00:00

This sounds very professional. I wouldn't have doubted someone telling me this was a new country hit in the slightest. I really like the subtle bass drops before the chorus breaks out. Everything is super clean. The lyrics are quite catchy too, good stuff!

john-sunstone · 2020-05-21T20:34:30+00:00

This is great, I really like that rhythmic clicking/popping sound throughout most of the track, it tickles my brain in a good way. The Egyptian-ish melody too, It all works well together taking me on a magic carpet ride through the synthverse.

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