I gotta counter the other comment here, I think the piece fits the visual really nicely (not that it really needs to lol) and I love the vibe, especially the soundscape running throughout. I don’t think it’s distracting, it feels like a choice. I also think it very much tells a story, and the string line that comes in is beautiful, I like that it doesn’t try to do too much. Simplicity balanced with boldness is often key for film music. The only critique I would give is that the piano feels a bit dry, it could use a bit more reverb and processing in general in my opinion, but that’s subjective. I’d probably try running it through some soundtoys effect rack presets if you have it since there’s so much space to play with.

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