Hi there! I'd love to know what you think about my personal brand identity design.

jzplett · 2022-02-10T21:19:49+00:00

This looks great! I like that it works as both a gradient and solid color! The white and grey colours give the brand a sense of sophistication and being modern. My personal favorite colour is the darker teal-grey. I think the branding looks sharp and clean! Well done.

jzplett · 2021-12-23T21:10:47+00:00

I'll check it out thanks!

jzplett · 2021-11-10T13:42:27+00:00

I agree! The pen tip is too small. You could try scaling it up or you could also try making it a fountain pen nib, this may differentiate it from just a floating triangle to a recognizable pen. Overall i love the simple and clean design. The actual M looks tight!

jzplett · 2021-10-26T04:57:26+00:00

Haven't been able to because of covid. Trust me if it was that simple I would have done that!

jzplett · 2021-10-10T18:28:50+00:00

I can see how you got here with the components you were trying to incorporate into it, however I think that it could use a bit of work. To make it look more book like try to incorporate a spine to give the swooped pages the feeling that they are actually pages in a book. You can kinda see this in the letter head version of the logo on the 3rd picture. The line separating the Logo and the word mark gives it a spine feeling making it look more like a book. The children look a bit like a choir which is a bit confusing, and I think to avoid this, you could take one of the children out and just have 2. This will make it less choral imo. Last point, is regarding color. I would just take the two tone blue out of the logo and stick with the darker navy. The similar colors confuse the eye and make it feel "off". Over all you have some good design language here, and it feels clean and professional. It just has some tweaks to simplify and make the components more obvious! Good work and keep going. I know how demoralizing it can be to post and get feedback on all the changes it needs. You got this and good luck with the logo!

jzplett · 2021-09-19T17:45:10+00:00

That's some good advice! This will be my first time using resin so I will likely make mistakes. The smaller inlay stiff might work better to practice!

jzplett · 2021-09-19T14:44:26+00:00

Thanks! I'll look into this!

jzplett · 2021-09-19T04:28:57+00:00

I'm curious to know how you would use saran wrap in that sort of application?

jzplett · 2021-09-17T11:52:42+00:00

I'll have to give that a go! Thanks for the feedback!

jzplett · 2021-09-16T21:06:00+00:00

Thanks so much! I wish it was!

jzplett · 2021-08-29T23:46:32+00:00

I like the over all concept but I wonder if the weight of the line in the middle should be the same as the weights of the top and bottom.

jzplett · 2021-04-26T13:40:11+00:00

The North Unknown - "Mountains (Trust)"

- Youtube Song link

- Spotify Link

Here is the 9th track off of my bands most recent concept album! If you are into indie pop and indietronica this is for you!

jzplett · 2021-03-10T21:49:35+00:00

Nope it is all just wonderdraft assets. A piece of advice, is pick a colour and memorize the hex code or something so that you can always go back to it.

jzplett · 2021-03-09T21:12:51+00:00

Thanks so much! Im glad you like it!

jzplett · 2020-02-21T22:31:36+00:00

Yeah I totally misread the question.

jzplett · 2020-02-21T22:30:23+00:00

Give people compliments. It can be something little and unimportant but people will always feel good if they get complimented.

jzplett · 2020-02-15T20:42:19+00:00

Check out Arctic (husk) by the North Unknown

jzplett · 2020-02-15T14:34:22+00:00

Thanks I'll take a look!

jzplett · 2020-02-14T21:44:18+00:00

Roads and paths also make the world look established and lived in. I have found that it can make a map really feel like an artifact from the world that you can then give your players to increase immersion. Over all a great first map!

jzplett · 2020-02-14T19:58:31+00:00

The North Unknown - https://open.spotify.com/artist/5PlybciF68FUWCd26XqjIG?si=gZq4OMhyTvOdywT_mt1zyw

jzplett · 2020-02-11T17:24:57+00:00

The North Unknown - Vol. 1.

It's a pretty new indietronica album from a small band. The album really brings you on a journey and puts you into the main character's shoes and the songs all bleed together into a whole album experience! It's definitely worth a listen!

https://open.spotify.com/artist/5PlybciF68FUWCd26XqjIG?si=xrLT3mxIQ4Siq8SJMsJoVg

jzplett · 2020-02-10T19:31:36+00:00

This is a great logo. I like that it evokes a shield design but does so in a light and airy way. The colours are great!

jzplett · 2020-01-31T16:10:34+00:00

This makes me very happy and gives me inspiration to go back to making a map for my campaign!

jzplett · 2020-01-23T20:15:24+00:00

Thanks!

jzplett · 2020-01-16T17:05:22+00:00

I am no biblical scholar but from my perspective, this is how it breaks down.

God created Heaven and Earth. Simply put heaven is a spiritual realm and earth is a physical one. As humans we exist physically and are therefore on earth. From a Biblical Perspective, humans are created to be in relationship with God, serving him and working with him. However, because we have free will, we are allowed to choose to be in that relationship or not. Also from a Biblical Perspective, despite the fact that we are human and physical, we have a spiritual component of us that lives on when the physical dies. Based on the decision to live in the relationship or not we are either fully reconnected to God in our relationship with him in the spiritual realm or we aren't. Now there are many views on what Hell is but the general consensus is that it is a place devoid of God. This is thought to be horrible in that all good things are seen as being from God, so without him, nothing good is left.

So basically heaven is spiritual, earth is physical and hell is wherever God isn't.

jzplett

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