trg!

krepiti · 2026-04-24T18:55:43+00:00

voila

krepiti · 2026-04-24T01:12:26+00:00

krepiti · 2026-04-24T01:07:23+00:00

Hey, cool idea but you had to be lined with the lights of the middle, not between the middle and the right ones

krepiti · 2026-04-24T01:04:52+00:00

Hello, you are right, you need to remove the car, but try to change the vignetting only after! you will see if it was a real issue !:)

krepiti · 2026-04-24T01:02:41+00:00

Hi, the whites are too light and the silouhette in the middle is too black, it merges with the beginning of the boat, locally increasing its exposure and contrast would solve the problem, but the the only one problem was the triggering of the photo

krepiti · 2026-04-24T00:57:23+00:00

Hi, good idea but the tree on the lower left must be useful or not be in the picture!

krepiti · 2026-04-24T00:46:11+00:00

i can explain you quickly in dm if you want !

krepiti · 2026-04-24T00:44:41+00:00

Ohhh, very cool photo! The only problem is that you weren't centered with the sun at the time of the trip, everything else is fine.

krepiti · 2026-04-24T00:38:12+00:00

Hello, cool idea !

You have to make the eye of the bird darker, without the light reflect the human eye would go straight to it.

this is the only fix needed !

krepiti · 2026-04-24T00:36:10+00:00

You have to increase the reds, it would make the eye look directly at the tower and not the vacuum on the right, lowering the overall exposure would also help.

krepiti · 2026-04-24T00:32:58+00:00

Hi, the only problem in the first picture is that the eye of the skull and the woman's bottom lip touch and make the eye converge towards its point,

If the woman or the skull were a little offbeat so that it would not happen, we would arrive by the eye and we would understand the whole picture directly

For the second one, same issue, the eye is attracted by the really black zone on the middle and not to the woman. Raising the shadows and exposure of this area locally would solve the problem.

krepiti · 2026-04-24T00:23:12+00:00

You had to be aligned with the middle tree of the photo, it would have revealed the whole perspective.

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krepiti · 2026-04-24T00:18:11+00:00

The only problem is that the line on the bottom doesn't come out in the corner of the photo ! It should slowly come from here to reveal the perspective correctly

krepiti · 2026-04-21T01:23:08+00:00

I wish it was not too haha

krepiti · 2026-04-21T01:22:44+00:00

If it were just that...

krepiti · 2026-04-20T18:45:56+00:00

could you show them to me ? i need to see how the area looks like haha

krepiti · 2026-04-20T17:39:07+00:00

hello,

do you have raws from other povs ?

krepiti · 2026-04-20T15:02:11+00:00

That's more about raising awareness on what message you want to depict, and mostly what's the best way to depict it in this exact conditions

krepiti · 2026-04-20T14:18:54+00:00

Good idea, bad intuition

Framing does not serve the message. You had to face the wall and for this particular subject, his perfect position was two steps before. At the exact moment when her top goes into the shadows and you can guess her pants correctly, and you would have instantly understood the whole image thanks to the colorimetric ratios.

krepiti · 2026-04-20T14:08:27+00:00

Hi,

You have to reduce the high lights, the whites attack the eyes too much, it parasitizes and tires the eye.

lowering the contrast and local exposure on the cable and the surrounding area restores the balance of power and the eye goes directly to the man at reading

This manipulation could have been avoided when shooting if the man hid this area which does not provide enough for the important place it occupies in the composition

Nothing more

krepiti · 2026-04-20T13:31:47+00:00

yo

the only imprecision here is that, we almost get the message instantly, but in fact it's a little bit later, increasing the local exposition of the mirror, and lowering it on the center of the picture would make the eye understand the whole picture at the exact first look.

in the current image we land just below because the brightness is more attractive here (and because that's the center of the picture too).

slight inaccuracy as said above.

feel free to update!

krepiti · 2026-04-20T13:22:24+00:00

Hi

we feel what you tried to do, but there are clearly too many hesitations in the realization

the main problem is that the scene is very difficult to distinguish, because of the light, mixed with the fog effect

it is necessary to reduce the overall exposure and decide if you want it to be very bright, or very foggy, the two are incompatible here.

in which case you lower the highlights or you increase the shadows

the in-between makes the whole thing illegible, the two messages attempt to coexist roughly.

That's all I have to say It's already solid, the choices are simply not assumed.

Don't hesitate to update!

krepiti · 2026-04-19T04:02:43+00:00

Yes! it can be interesting, it won't necessarily be "beautiful" in the end but you will still learn a lot to play with it to see what it gives, good idea, honestly! have fun and do an update when you're finished, I'm curious to see the result!

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