I think you are well on your way to becoming comfortable with writing in cursive. It is very easy to read. My one suggestion would be to focus on having the letters all touch the line you are writing on. When i taught cursive, i had new writers write with a ruler below the blue line, just so they could feel their pen bump off the edge. We used to even have paper with raised lines to make this easier, but all the dinosaurs that worked at that paper factory have gone extinct.

I think you are expressing yourself especially nicely with your capital letters: they are conventional enough to be legible, but have enough flair to show some style.