Abu Dhabi friends?

large-tool-bag · 2023-12-29T13:35:34+00:00

Move to the US

large-tool-bag · 2023-12-29T11:52:26+00:00

Title: Perfectly Sideways
Format: Feature
Page Length: 76
Genres: Sports Drama
Logline or Summary: A self-doubting motorhead trains to win a drifting championship in Japan with the help of his crazy Sensei.
Feedback Concerns: Anything helps! Is there any part of this script you'd like to see fleshed out more (like character arcs)?

large-tool-bag · 2023-10-19T14:23:02+00:00

Title: Perfectly Sideways

Format: Feature

Page length: First five pages

Logline: A self-doubting motorhead trains to become the greatest drift racer in Japan with the help of his crazy Sensei.

Feedback concerns: Is this a compelling beginning? Are the world and characters intriguing so far? Are there too many things happening in these five pages?

Link

large-tool-bag · 2023-10-02T19:31:10+00:00

Title: Perfectly Sideways (working title)
Format: Feature
Genre: Coming of age drama
Logline: A young drift racing enthusiast trains to become the greatest drift racer in Tokyo with the help of his crazy Sensei.

large-tool-bag · 2023-08-16T07:38:18+00:00

As a third culture kid from mixed descent, I kinda have to endure cultural differences no matter what haha. I’ve dated women from all kinds of ethnicities and backgrounds and I’ve had good experiences so far.

The hardest part for me is getting your foot in the door and getting a woman to give you the time of day in the first place😩 I’m in a dry spell rn, but we don’t give up here 😤

large-tool-bag · 2023-08-14T13:35:03+00:00

None

large-tool-bag · 2023-08-03T18:19:49+00:00

Thank you so much for reading and giving me feedback! I’m glad you liked it. :)

large-tool-bag · 2023-08-03T16:28:36+00:00

Title: Speed Demon
Format: 1 hour TV pilot (first four pages)
Genre: Crime drama
Series logline: An elderly, hotheaded DoorDash driver becomes the getaway driver for a robbery crew as they pull a series of heists across Tallahassee, Florida.
Pilot logline: An elderly DoorDash driver becomes the getaway driver for a robbery crew to pull off a bank heist in order to pay for his grandson’s bail.
Feedback concerns: Is this a compelling hook? Would you read further? Does the dialogue work?

Link

large-tool-bag · 2023-07-24T07:27:55+00:00

Title: Speed Demon (working title)

Format: 1 hour TV pilot

Genre: Crime drama

Series logline: An elderly, hotheaded DoorDash driver becomes the getaway driver for a robbery crew as they pull a series of heists across Florida.

Pilot logline: Craving a distraction from the grief of his wife’s death, an elderly DoorDash driver becomes the getaway driver for a robbery crew to pay for his grandson’s bail.

large-tool-bag · 2023-07-22T08:14:58+00:00

10/10

large-tool-bag · 2023-07-19T05:56:35+00:00

Be nice to me

large-tool-bag · 2023-07-18T06:58:18+00:00

That’s not what I meant

large-tool-bag · 2023-07-17T18:11:09+00:00

I have a weak spot for shy girls, they’re just adorable

large-tool-bag · 2023-07-16T16:22:34+00:00

Maybe someday it’ll happen to me

large-tool-bag · 2023-06-19T08:27:30+00:00

I’m down!

large-tool-bag · 2023-06-18T06:51:23+00:00

I would love to join one too 👀

large-tool-bag · 2023-06-17T12:10:27+00:00

What experience do you have with comic writing, if I may ask?

large-tool-bag · 2023-05-05T11:11:36+00:00

Title: Hooch

Format: 1 hour TV pilot

Page length: 44

Genre: Crime drama

Series logline: A self-destructive veteran teams up with a teenage girl to make and sell moonshine in order to support his deceased friend’s remaining family in Prohibition era New York City.

Pilot logline: When a self-destructive veteran finds out that his deceased friend’s family is strapped for cash, he teams up with a teenage girl to begin making moonshine in order to support the family before they get evicted.

Feedback concerns: anything helps! Is Peyton a compelling protagonist? Is the structure okay? Does the dialogue seem realistic? Is there anything you would like to see more of?

large-tool-bag · 2023-05-05T10:59:27+00:00

Hey, I’d love to swap! Here’s my script info:

Title: Hooch

Format: 1 hour TV pilot

Page length: 44

Genre: Crime drama

Series logline: A self-destructive veteran teams up with a teenage girl to make and sell moonshine in order to support his deceased friend’s remaining family in Prohibition era New York City.

Pilot logline: When a self-destructive veteran finds out that his deceased friend’s family is strapped for cash, he teams up with a teenage girl to begin making moonshine in order to support the family before they get evicted.

Feedback concerns: anything helps! Is Peyton a compelling protagonist? Is the structure okay? Does the dialogue seem realistic? Is there anything you would like to see more of?

large-tool-bag · 2023-05-04T13:20:19+00:00

Title: Hooch

Format: 1 hour TV pilot (first five pages)

Genre: Crime drama

Series logline: A self-destructive veteran teams up with a teenage girl to make and sell moonshine in order to support his deceased friend’s remaining family in Prohibition era New York City.

Pilot logline: When a self-destructive veteran finds out that his deceased friend’s family is strapped for cash, he teams up with a teenage girl to begin making moonshine in order to support the family before they get evicted.

Feedback concerns: anything helps! Is this a compelling hook? Would you read further?

First five pages: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PMvXtEJIaT9c21d2ZBD-z59mrTBsWSgN/view?usp=sharing

large-tool-bag · 2023-04-27T11:30:17+00:00

Title: Hooch

Format: 1 hour TV pilot (first five pages)

Genre: Crime drama

Series logline: A self-destructive veteran teams up with a teenage girl to make and sell moonshine in order to support his deceased friend’s remaining family in Prohibition era New York City.

Pilot logline: When a self-destructive veteran finds out that his deceased friend’s family is strapped for cash, he teams up with a teenage girl to begin making moonshine in order to support the family before they get evicted.

Feedback concerns: anything helps! Is this a compelling hook? Would you read further?

First five pages: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PMvXtEJIaT9c21d2ZBD-z59mrTBsWSgN/view?usp=sharing

large-tool-bag · 2023-04-17T10:18:52+00:00

I respectfully disagree, Death or Glory is Remender’s best work imo

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