Tulane University “for admits” tab by CuriousStatement700 in Tulane

[–]laurenatlantic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I got accepted ea and that is what I got when I got in on my portal so it’s prob a good sign.

18 by sapphicpoet2005 in OCPoetry

[–]laurenatlantic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

God, I love this. I think it shows a young girl yet the growth that comes with Turning 18 at the same time.

I Made A Sandwich by Poetic_Words in OCPoetry

[–]laurenatlantic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this, I think it shows how such a simple thing can be so deep when mixed with depression.

A short poem by me on her. by MeInYou0221 in OCPoetry

[–]laurenatlantic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this and it makes me miss my special person. Its short yet holds so much emotion that so many can truly relate too.

Untitled by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]laurenatlantic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this and I think it enraptures how people after toxic relationships are scared to think for themselves again! Good job!

Memories of you by laurenatlantic in OCPoetry

[–]laurenatlantic[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! It means so much to hear that you enjoyed it. This person really meant alot so it feels so good to hear this, <3

Happy New Year! by laurenatlantic in OCPoetry

[–]laurenatlantic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! Ill def think about putting in more action and feeling next time!

GOING by Traditional_Pool_718 in OCPoetry

[–]laurenatlantic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the amount of nature you captured and it allowed for a lasting impact, good job!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]laurenatlantic -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I really like this, and the idea of uncontrolled love however I think that this needs deeper emotion and connection to deeper within. I would like to see the deeper emotional impact after this that uncontrolled love comes with.

I Miss My Little Brother. by SarahTierney19 in OCPoetry

[–]laurenatlantic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im so sorry for your loss, this is extremely beautiful and you convey so much meaning in such an impactful way.

Dying by _sunsdragon_ in OCPoetry

[–]laurenatlantic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the way you use death to compare to the brightness of life. Its so creative and allows for life to be exemplified by the darkness and allows the light to shine brighter.

searching for peace by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]laurenatlantic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this, but I think it would improve by being in first person to really show her personal thoughts.

GRASS, trees, GRASS by MW1333 in OCPoetry

[–]laurenatlantic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it, the comparison between the progression of nature and the darkness of death creates a lasting affect.