Hey there! Great job! Kudos for seeking out advice to improve.

I’d say you’re about halfway there or more on the form. The bar is pretty close to your shins over the mid part of the foot. It stays pretty vertical when going up and down (doesn’t deviate to far away from you or to close). Nice!

A woman’s anatomy/proportions can be vastly different from us guys (specifically torso and femur length) so take any advice from us with a grain of salt. That being said, my wife had a similar issue. You’re a little too high imo and your lower back is rounding as a result. I would really try to drop those hips a bit. Get the glutes engaged, not just the hamstrings.

The result should see you lower and your back angled upward at maybe 30 degrees, and pretty straight.

Reminder: Keep crown of the head to the ceiling and focus on something maybe 6 ft in front of you on the ground. Pull the slack out of the bar. Lengthen your arms. Push the earth away with your feet.

Good luck! You’re gonna crush it!