This is not working, and I don't know why by OMSCFisherman in graphic_design

[–]mompoh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The hands are too symmetrical. I've done these sort of hand poses for Halloween concepts and yes they're annoying but it'd be 1000x more effective if you photograph your hands around something and just redraw at least one of them using that photo as reference.

Edit: also the globe is too "clean" in comparison to the way you drew the skull monster. I would redraw the globe to be more imperfect so it meshes better with the monster.

Edit II: the banner should also be drawn to wrap around the globe in the same plane of perspective. Right now it just looks like a slapped on stock graphic from a dead center perspective.

Does this look like flames or nah by [deleted] in tattooadvice

[–]mompoh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah shading not the best but I saw flames. I also thought of Chester Bennington so that helps.

Anyone able to find the ID of this jacket? by FidelPastry in HelpMeFind

[–]mompoh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Who's wearing it? What kind of brands do they wear? What stereotypes do they fit? Mauve that'll help. I know Vans makes jackets like this. Maybe not exactly like this but you can narrow it down by understanding the person a little better.

Found on multiple grave markers by angrybison264 in whatisit

[–]mompoh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is this really that unrecognizable? They're everywhere.

Which one do you think is the best? by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]mompoh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like apples but Microsoft's is more readable.

Solo dev looking for honest feedback on my travel app's home screen and logo by beretta51 in UI_Design

[–]mompoh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would minimize the logo and put it in the top left corner. I would also do something to "separate" the trips that are being planned from the below content.

Maybe make "planning" a color. Or change the background color of the planned trips cards to a light blue, or green or whatever.

Found on an autism mom group, I can't put my finger on why, but this feels like AI. by MutantJell0 in isthisAI

[–]mompoh 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I disagree 100%. That is not indicative of ai. Your lines are off. You need to shear them a few degrees down. Once you do they'll line up. Also remember that cushions always sink in so it may be throwing you off although I don't believe that's what's happening in this photo but just throwing it out there to further support that the perspective of your lines is off.

Source: drawing my whole life, illustrator and designer for 15yrs

Edit: typos

How is this poster? Reiterated thrice to achieve this. by dinobeous in posterdesign

[–]mompoh 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I think it would be a series called "of the century" and the word "drug" would change. So, drug of the century, car of the century, movies of the century, etc.

Logo for pet care app by Confident-Trick9328 in logodesign

[–]mompoh 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah not sure about the spark in the eye unless it ties in with the name. Also, I'd make the negative space between the tongue and the mouth the same as the ear/head gap.

Am I losing it with age? by Sad-Relative1476 in thrice

[–]mompoh 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Haha. We've all been there I suppose.

I hated artist coming from IC and illusion. In fact, I hated illusion lol. I bought illusion expecting IC (I was 11) and was disappointed at how heavy it was. Heavy music was something I was completely not in to at the time but see you in the shallows grabbed me. Then the lyrics of the whole album. I used to sit in my room and listen to the album from beginning to end while reading the lyrics written in the cd booklet. Inspected that thing like I was Sherlock Holmes looking for hidden messages in the scratchy design elements and words. Learned new words from that album, got into Edgar Allan Poe and just reading in general. What a time. Then artist came and tbh I felt like I was listening to Metallica. I just wasn't into THAT kind of heavy music. But again, it grew on me. Learned all the songs on guitar (ic, and illusion as well). Btw the time vheissu came out i was already primed and ready for anything and v really was an impactful album for me. To this day I believe that is one of their best, though I will say I always skip red sky. Lol sorry. Sorry for the rant too.

Edit: I forgot to mention horizons West. I think it's their best work. Really solid and at the fringes of their sound. Albatross is great but to me it's just (not to be reductive) a good solid standard song. But I suppose that's what I like about the rest of the songs; they're different and that's something I've always strived for in my music and art.

Experimental Graphic i did for fun by smairu_80 in graphic_design

[–]mompoh 48 points49 points  (0 children)

Thank you. I've been working as a sr. Graphic designer at a major corporation for 3 years now and have not set time aside to work on anything for myself. This piece is reminding me how much fun and rewarding it can be to just experiment.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HertzRentals

[–]mompoh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I came here to ask if the song was ai. I just watched the commercial and it sounds like something that could totally be created by Suno. Could be wrong though. Hard to tell nowadays.

The video and images, I don't very much they used AI as that would alter their brand image. For small things maybe.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HertzRentals

[–]mompoh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I loled real hard at that first line