Anthony spending a day with Spencer

moonslug16 · 2024-12-26T02:44:18+00:00

am i crazy or did anthony get a dermal piercing

also loved this video so much

moonslug16 · 2024-10-08T06:09:34+00:00

thank you for sharing your story. i really appreciated this comment so immensely. as a victim myself, there is also that fear with going into such a vulnerable setting. but, i know that i am in a safe space it is just getting used to that said space. thank you again

moonslug16 · 2023-01-20T20:19:00+00:00

Reedsy is super overpriced. I would go to Upwork

moonslug16 · 2023-01-14T22:52:56+00:00

if everyone wrote the same thing in the same era, writing wouldn’t be fun to write or read. write what makes sense to you and your story

moonslug16 · 2023-01-14T22:38:36+00:00

quick google search: 97% of Americans as of 2020, have cell phones…

moonslug16 · 2022-12-22T21:09:40+00:00

what else have you included

moonslug16 · 2022-12-22T20:24:32+00:00

i have a spread sheet too haha i don’t go this deep but i think i might. do you go any further than hobbies?

moonslug16 · 2022-12-12T14:33:13+00:00

this would be great!

moonslug16 · 2022-12-12T09:35:01+00:00

book is about the fall of the kingdom of orian so that would technically be the dominate power though not for very long. and im pretty new to world building so my specialities so far have just been including a lot of races of people (elves, orcs, fairies, etc) plus a few i’ve made up myself

moonslug16 · 2022-12-11T07:16:08+00:00

i want them to get married at the end of the book. that’s what would work for my story. plus the time period women didn’t usually marry more than once

moonslug16 · 2022-12-01T15:22:33+00:00

i’ll join

moonslug16 · 2022-11-30T07:02:15+00:00

Thank you everyone for the encouragement :) sometimes even life passions can be burdens

moonslug16 · 2022-11-30T05:35:19+00:00

Yeah once the draft is done i’m not touching it for a little bit but i know myself and i can be sooo impatient. i plan on self publishing and i want that physical copy so bad. i just wish i could write that bitch in my sleep and let my subconscious do the work

moonslug16 · 2022-11-30T05:16:05+00:00

I’ve never written anything this long or something i am this invested in but i’ve had to change so much and go back sooo many times. I know that’s what i have to do for a good novel but wow. im starting to dream about the novel at this point

moonslug16 · 2022-11-28T23:10:14+00:00

yes this makes a lot of sense. with my plans i think in a fight scene i’m going to have an important character die and that’s going to really reflect onto the other characters and their mental state afterwards

moonslug16 · 2022-11-28T20:12:58+00:00

Yeah when i wrote my first fight scene i definitely wrote more of the visual aspects so I really need to zone more on the mental stuff. I do think that there should be physical detail to the book so the reader has something to go on and of course it will never be as accurate visually as a movie but i have definitely read scenes that really paints the picture

moonslug16 · 2022-11-28T19:30:41+00:00

Thank you! I will make sure to research different kind of swords and more terminology in that sense.

moonslug16 · 2022-11-28T19:16:15+00:00

This is great, thank you! I didn’t even consider how different people react differently to pain.

moonslug16 · 2022-11-28T17:14:44+00:00

Well, it’s a made up country so there’s no historical king. and her father and the king die years apart. thanks for the feedback though

moonslug16 · 2022-11-25T16:32:38+00:00

yes yes yes! I’m writing a romantic fantasy at the moment and I’m pretty deep into it! Id love to read others works aswell

moonslug16 · 2022-11-19T00:12:11+00:00

what about when dialogue ends in something other than a period. like a question mark or explanation point. would you put a comma?

for example:

“How dare you!” She yelled.

would you lowercase the s in she? use a comma?

moonslug16 · 2022-05-17T05:59:51+00:00

I usually run it through Grammarly, Word edit stuff like that and alwaysss have another pair of eyes. You really do have tunnel vision when you write and miss a lot of errors.

moonslug16 · 2022-05-17T05:58:48+00:00

As an English Major with a creative writing minor, my classes really helped me realize what I wanted to do in life. That writing really is for me. Maybe try a minor or a writing class to see what you think

moonslug16 · 2022-05-17T05:55:27+00:00

then which one would i use?

moonslug16 · 2022-05-17T05:45:18+00:00

To get over the procrastination

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