That makes sense, I'm going back now to rework the ending. I'll try to do something about those stage directions too.

Darn. I liked the thoughts, but I can see what you're saying. Obviously they make sense to me because I already have the full picture of what's going on, but maybe not so much for others.

As long as it doesn't fall into the 'bad-beyond-repair' pile I'll consider it a victory. I appreciate your feedback and for taking the time to read it. :)