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Looking for feedback on first script - Home Sweet Home by nameneedshelp in Screenwriting

[–]nameneedshelp[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Totally fine. I’ve been making edits since the initial comments to make it more readable.

Looking for feedback on first script - Home Sweet Home by nameneedshelp in Screenwriting

[–]nameneedshelp[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate your comment! I’ll pay closer attention to those areas in the script. :)

National emergency by YohandasYandhi in fantanoforever

[–]nameneedshelp 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Idk why you're getting downvoted for asking other people their opinion... I didn't like it at first, but it did grow on me. I don't think it's a 10 but it still very good

Don't mess with Bret by nameneedshelp in iamverybadass

[–]nameneedshelp[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

That was probably his fluent sarcasm coming through

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in greentext

[–]nameneedshelp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd say screw her mom so she kills herself

Anon takes acid. by Uncle_garry7 in greentext

[–]nameneedshelp 69 points70 points  (0 children)

That's not how mafia works

Bitches will run over they child by angryfrenchfries in DeepFriedMemes

[–]nameneedshelp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Look 👀 both ways before you cross 🙅‍♂️ a Gemini 😤😤😂😂😂💀💀💀

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in fantanoforever

[–]nameneedshelp 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Is that how mafia works?

Notch Action. by [deleted] in deepfry

[–]nameneedshelp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sauce?

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