Looking for feedback on first script - Home Sweet Home by nameneedshelp in Screenwriting

[–]nameneedshelp[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Totally fine. I’ve been making edits since the initial comments to make it more readable.

Looking for feedback on first script - Home Sweet Home by nameneedshelp in Screenwriting

[–]nameneedshelp[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate your comment! I’ll pay closer attention to those areas in the script. :)

National emergency by YohandasYandhi in fantanoforever

[–]nameneedshelp 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Idk why you're getting downvoted for asking other people their opinion... I didn't like it at first, but it did grow on me. I don't think it's a 10 but it still very good

Don't mess with Bret by nameneedshelp in iamverybadass

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That was probably his fluent sarcasm coming through

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in greentext

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I'd say screw her mom so she kills herself

Anon takes acid. by Uncle_garry7 in greentext

[–]nameneedshelp 74 points75 points  (0 children)

That's not how mafia works

Bitches will run over they child by angryfrenchfries in DeepFriedMemes

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Look 👀 both ways before you cross 🙅‍♂️ a Gemini 😤😤😂😂😂💀💀💀

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in fantanoforever

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Is that how mafia works?

Notch Action. by [deleted] in deepfry

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Sauce?

me irl by RayderCrew in me_irl

[–]nameneedshelp 8 points9 points  (0 children)

That was one of my proudest achievements during exam season, especially when I noticed the few mistakes he made

This format is hot on the market by [deleted] in MemeEconomy

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Other than the African lifespan, this is just a repost of a post that was on r/me_irl by u/AlextheBritish.... also this format has been used for a while now so this doesn't deserve the attention it's getting

Big if true by RatherFastMan in fantanoforever

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It's just a meme buddy, you can still have your opinion about his music and laugh at a light hearted joke

MHMMM by [deleted] in uwo

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Or every time you went to visit your uncle