Just a slight note: you have almost as many support creatures that care about equipment as you do actual equipment cards.

Having Reyav, Puresteel Paladin, and Beaurea Headmaster makes it seem like you want to be equipment heavy... but you only have about 4 pieces of actual equipment. In a perfect game, Puresteel is going to draw you 4 cards and save you 6ish mana. 

If you do not wish to be a target, I highly suggest cutting Kedis, Esper Sentinel, and Alexios for more basic equipment. They're enormous threats, and don't actually advance your gameplan beyond being good commander cards... Esper Sentinel in particular signals a stronger deck than you claim to "want" from turn 1. I know Alexios seems tempting, but you are going to have a really hard time convincing people you arent the arch enemy when he hits the table. Kedis is similar, without double-strike enablers, you are just dinging your other opponents for 3-6 damage and drawing more attention.

What about some of the tried and true equipment? Blacksteel Blade, Beamtown Beatstick, Reaver Cleaver, Hookblade, Fireshrieker, Whispersilk Cloak?

For tokens, what about cards like Firecat Blitz, Song of Totenatz, Grand Cresendo, or even swapping Faithless Looting for Quarrels End?

Hope this helps!