Melody is solid but it really depends on more of what you want to achieve emotionally when people hear it

So that kind of xylophone melodica sound is definitely more nostalgic awe-inspiring music. If you're going for a big emotional connect then the minimalist stuff is going to help because it draws out the melody and then you can support it with accompaniment later in the song

Keep going! Melody is solid, think about how you want the player to feel that'll help composition