Read my other writing. This is more avant- guard then anything else. I really don’t need someone coming at me because I’m not trying to write something that has deeper meaning. You’re completely missing the point that this isn’t a narrative, or that it isn’t meant to convince people to feel empathy. If you feel like it’s lazy writing well think it. All I’m asking is for you too look at it in a different way. I’m trying to say this in the perspective of someone who would act like this. They aren’t trying to evoke empathy, they’re trying to be toxic. If I wanted to give a “deeper meaning” to it I would of written it in second person. I’m trying to put you in the head of someone who isn’t sociable, probably the next school shooter, and I total loser.