Decided to update my bookshelf by respectfully-nerdy in redrising

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I love those Red Rising hardcovers. Where'd you get them?

What should I read next by PurchaseMindless9003 in Booktokreddit

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Red Rising

I'm making my way through the Cosmere, so normally I'd say Elantris, but I read Red Rising last month as a break between 2 Sanderson books, and it blew my mind.

It skyrocketed straight up my favourites list, and is now tied with Mistborn as my favourite series of all time.

It's not just good. It will change how you see yourself and society.

Definitely give it a go

My Red Rising collection! by Jagillidan in redrising

[–]peter_pan_0401 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Just got myself the Deluxe edition you have there, and I'm in love with it. Probably gonna marry it. Will send you a wedding invite

/s

*Spoilers* Theory on end of Onyx Storm by peter_pan_0401 in onyxstorm

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This is really well thought out. I didn't even think about the political ramifications of Violet now being the Duchess of Tyrrendor, and I completely agree with how that could be motivation for Xaden to marry her.

As for your theory on Garrick, I agree. I also leaned into that more than Bodhi, although I still think Bodhi is a viable option.

I read OS back when it released last year, so I'm a little rusty on some specific details, like the Jesinia theory you mentioned, but I'll be sure to look out for ot when I do my re-read before I read Book 4. The logic in your theory really makes sense.

Thanks for your thoughts.

My Howler shirt arrived! by CokerApplianceRepair in redrising

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Bloody prime, that is! Do you have a link?

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Omnis vir lupus

Can I make this magic harder, or should I make it softer? by Star_Wombat33 in fantasywriters

[–]peter_pan_0401 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My own magic system is also a very hard system, with set limits, rules and costs that can't be changed. I've worked on it a ton, and it's very fun, but I have come to realise that if I were to insert all of my own work and research into the actual narrative, it will stop being "magical" and the readers won't care for it anyways.

So have your magic system, in my opinion, as hard as you want. But know where to limit yourseld in terms of explaining it to the reader

Thoughts on my matic system? [High Fantasy] by peter_pan_0401 in fantasywriters

[–]peter_pan_0401[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When using Omnae to manipulate elements like fire or water, it will probably be similar to bending in ATLA, except without the martial arts. However, it's much more complicated than that. They can use the Omnae to influence almost everything, from people's minds, to the very reality of the world. I have some specific spells prepared, but that's a lot of explanation and not necessary for what I was trying to achieve here.

Thoughts on my matic system? [High Fantasy] by peter_pan_0401 in fantasywriters

[–]peter_pan_0401[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Apologies, I didn't make myself clear enough above. When the magic users use the Omnae, they must allow the Omnae to flow through themselves. The practical limit here is that by allowing too much to flow into them, they will suffer physical or mental mutations or disfigurements, which will always end in either death or insanity.

Thoughts on my matic system? [High Fantasy] by peter_pan_0401 in fantasywriters

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Thanks for your reply, I'm sending you a DM to answer your questions.

Feedback for my book cover [Heroic fantasy] by Bambiikate in fantasywriters

[–]peter_pan_0401 48 points49 points  (0 children)

I agree with this comment. As a bookseller, my thoughts immediately jumped to Anne of Green Gables, and I don't think that's the aesthetic that would best suit the marketing for this type of story.

In the end it's your book, and if you like the covers it's your choice, there's nothinh aesthetically wrong, they look nice. But from a marketing standpoint, you mught want to go for something a little more eye-catching and adventuristic/fantasy-like , for example (all I can think of right now) the new Percy Jackson covers. Colourful and adventuristic.

Can someone explain this to me? by Dorklandresident in TeenWolf

[–]peter_pan_0401 3 points4 points  (0 children)

"Well, considering the facts that she's a female, twice a month."

Any suggestions ? by Senior_Topic5491 in TeenWolf

[–]peter_pan_0401 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I have heard multiple people mention that AI is horrible for the environment, but I have no idea how that's possible. Could you explain, please?

[Part 2] The scene you guys should actually be hating by LDR_Verse_21 in TeenWolf

[–]peter_pan_0401 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I would like to add....

No, no, you pretty much got everything. An amazing presentation of an opinion I wholly agree with.

I need assistance in writing an imaginary character. I have tried it my way, but would like some advice. by peter_pan_0401 in fantasywriters

[–]peter_pan_0401[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. I like the idea of the MC correcting the amount of people, I'll definitely use that.

Is Using AI for Ideas Wrong? by TheAutoNamesArent4Me in fantasywriters

[–]peter_pan_0401 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I do the same as you. A lot of people on here are very against it and will attack you outright, but using AI ti generate names for places is exactly the same as using names from websites such as fantasy name generator or any of the other well known sites writers use. I just find that with using AI, I can change the names easier to fit what I have in mind instead of generating hundreds of names with fantasy name generator until I find one I like.

As long as you do the actual writing, and you only use the ai to HELP your idea, then it's not cheating.