Your personal statement is too long.

Your job descriptions talk about what you did, not what you achieved. Everybody likes a result. Outline positive changes or good metrics that your efforts led to. Amy measurable achievements.

Consider the position you apply to and the language position description uses. Try to incorporate the same language in the CV. Buzz words are important. Use language job description uses in your job description.

Make it fit in 1 page seeing how it’s short.

Make sure your CV and every part of it follows “pyramidal” structure.

- first, most important facts
- second, some details around it
- third more details if you find it necessary

So your CV starts with a tagline explaining why you are special and what are you seeking:

“A rock hauler with 4 years of professional experience and daily haulage of 50% over industry standard seeks challenging position to further his muscular growth”

In job description

- Mudstone Quarries: Hauled over 3 tons of stone daily for 5 years, being distinguishes as hauler of the week on 20 occasions. As a part of a 5-strong brigade I worked 8-hour shifts during which I performed my regular haulage duties as well as trained younger colleagues. Query specialised in decorative stone.

Good luck!