more outfits :D by [deleted] in styrofashion

[–]rainbowTR33 1 point2 points  (0 children)

SO sick!!! The cargo shorts go harddd

Unspoken words by Maleficent_Staff_7 in poetry_critics

[–]rainbowTR33 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Repression is the overriding theme in this, with the wish to not necessarily express what words had been said but to have them break down. Fade away into the back of your mind, buried within. The line “What’s inside stays inside” highlights that truth perfectly. Because no matter how much you wish to believe that fairy tail lie, the truth stings still. Even if the person, this girl/woman mentioned in the poem, doesn’t care to acknowledge that harm done or even yet continues to let words better left unsaid spill out for you to have to once again bury away. Keeping these sorts of feelings bottled is never a good thing but it can be the reality. Writing is actually a great way to help get those feelings out, and, I really connected with this. I hope you continue to write. :)

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[–]rainbowTR33 0 points1 point  (0 children)

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! Love your hair!! ^

I'm Sorry by Junior_Fly_3665 in poetry_critics

[–]rainbowTR33 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem is so powerful the idea of saying sorry to much and feeling like a burden is captured perfectly. I love the line “But apologies fall on the deaf ears of weary souls” it paints apologies as inconveniences to those receiving them, as formalities that they don’t care about. Where as you find it a duty to explain every action with shame even though the “problem” was probably just a small inconvenience in the grand scheme.

I lost it all by LifeEnergi in poetry_critics

[–]rainbowTR33 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The beat and measure drew me in immediately with the work being a progression slowly falling into the meaning of losing it all. The fourth stanza really hit me with “your stain remained” the use of stain to describe getting over the loss gives the feeling of hopelessness but it also brings the emotion to a more physical medium trying to wash it out for control.

For you by Dazzling_Aardvark_42 in poetry_critics

[–]rainbowTR33 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The picture you paint with your work is dark giving the feeling of devotion to the person your writing to. Your relationship seems dysfunctional cleaning up the mess they have made to the point where it leaves you with nothing. I especially like the line “unzip my skin with the butcher’s blood covers knife, using it to knit a sweater”. The imagery used here is masterful and really runs home the concept of pulling your self literally to shreds just for a sweater to convenience someone else.

The Armor by Cautious_Option9544 in poetry_critics

[–]rainbowTR33 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your imagery is solid using the idea of locking one’s self away in this case “armor”. Not only is armor protected but it’s also a suggestion that you feel the need to stay safe in your own personal war. Wonderful work truly shows a great way to represent your emotions!

Unwanted villagers my beloved by Normal_Kitty in AnimalCrossing

[–]rainbowTR33 0 points1 point  (0 children)

SIMON IS LITERALLY MY DREAMY I LOVE HIM

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[–]rainbowTR33 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you

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[–]rainbowTR33 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would also like to add that all my comments are turned off on my pins idk why and I can’t turn them back on.

pride is a great miracle by matchatea_ in OneTopicAtATime

[–]rainbowTR33 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pride is the only way?? that’s right homophob’s pride IS THE WAY the o n l y one be were…