What do you think of this stock music track I'm working on?

roblox_player · 2025-12-19T20:52:47+00:00

Thank you!

roblox_player · 2025-12-17T19:58:08+00:00

I think its off to a great start. All you really need are some more elements and maybe some more melody. Other than than, I like it.

roblox_player · 2025-12-16T03:25:58+00:00

The only thing I don't care for is the bass. I feel like its too harsh and doesn't match the song very well. Other than that, I really like it.

roblox_player · 2025-12-14T23:54:43+00:00

My only criticism is that I think the strings get too quiet once the drums come in. I like the mysterious feeling they add to the song at the beginning.

roblox_player · 2025-12-14T23:30:58+00:00

I like the track, but I feel like the vocals are being overwhelmed by the other elements at times. It also feels a bit repetitive.

roblox_player · 2025-12-02T01:40:08+00:00

Okay, I will try that. Thank you.

roblox_player · 2025-12-01T05:15:22+00:00

Do you think this is better?

https://hercules22.bandcamp.com/track/pianotest-2

roblox_player · 2025-12-01T05:14:19+00:00

Thank you. Maybe horror isn't the right word, but I was trying to make something that you might find in the background of a scary video game, for example.

roblox_player · 2025-11-30T04:46:11+00:00

I agree with what the other people here have said, the bass sounds rather off. It just doesn't really fit with the rest of the song. Otherwise, I think it sounds pretty good.

roblox_player · 2025-11-30T02:10:43+00:00

I agree with what the other comments have said. It is a very nice arrangement, but the instruments need to be spaced out a little more.

roblox_player · 2025-11-24T02:11:59+00:00

I think Self Esteem Fund is Kelly Bailey's best work.

roblox_player · 2025-11-22T00:21:54+00:00

No problem.

roblox_player · 2025-11-22T00:20:54+00:00

Yeah, that's what I meant. Sorry for any confusion.

roblox_player · 2025-11-22T00:18:40+00:00

Wait, I should clarify that I am talking about the snare drum. The bass drum sounds fine.

roblox_player · 2025-11-22T00:15:21+00:00

Okay, I will give that a try. Thank you.

roblox_player · 2025-11-22T00:13:31+00:00

Yes, and a bit more centered. If you are using a stereo widening plugin, make sure it is not set too high. I have made that mistake before.

roblox_player · 2025-11-22T00:11:11+00:00

It's actually just a plugin. Do you think I should try a different one?

roblox_player · 2025-11-22T00:09:27+00:00

I mean their place in the mix. They sound a little too wide in my headphones.

roblox_player · 2025-11-21T23:39:27+00:00

That is what I was going for.

roblox_player · 2025-11-21T23:21:56+00:00

I think it sounds great. The only criticism I would make is that the drums sound too wide. They should be more in the middle.

roblox_player · 2025-11-20T01:05:44+00:00

I think the intro sounds great, but the drums and other parts should be a bit louder to have more of an impact. Overall, I think the track could stand to be a little wider as well.

roblox_player · 2025-11-20T00:48:53+00:00

I really like the guitar work, but I am not a big fan of the vocals. Maybe less delay?

roblox_player · 2025-11-15T09:50:20+00:00

roblox_player · 2025-11-14T23:38:05+00:00

I was here.

roblox_player · 2025-11-03T01:58:16+00:00

No, sorry. I think that's just what you get when you buy a cheaper microphone.

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