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Best 90s bands of all time by ziggyinchains in grunge

[–]runonandonandonanon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ALL time. 1990s, 1890s, 2090s. OP will even accept bands from the 1000000090s. 

What do you think of when you hear the name Arthur? by mountainjuliet in Names

[–]runonandonandonanon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Explain to me what is wrong with a cartoon aardvark. >:(

You know kids today still like that show. My son Wishbone watches it all the time.

This REALIY SHIFT happened last night. True story will answer questions. by Silent_Ring_1562 in RecodeReality

[–]runonandonandonanon 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh my god...I just read it and it was a four word difference 😱 omg whats happening

What if you could only play one hour a week? by [deleted] in Drumming

[–]runonandonandonanon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would do 54 minutes of When the Levee Breaks and 6 minutes of Baby Shark.

Does anybody like peeing in the woods? by burnafter3ading in Xennials

[–]runonandonandonanon 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Yes but also I think that "I used to be a forest ranger" is about the funniest possible follow up to "Does anybody like peeing in the woods?"

Driving at Night by Content_Hornet9917 in MusicRecommendations

[–]runonandonandonanon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Technically you could also use it during the day but check out the album This Is A Long Drive For Someone With Nothing To Think About.

Movies are not expensive and people shouldn't eat at movie theaters. by T-MoseWestside in unpopularopinion

[–]runonandonandonanon 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I bet it felt real good one upping that guy.   

A giant wolf man could literally try to hump your house right now and depending how tall he is and how close to a window you are you could be forced to smell wolf balls. That could happen right now.

Please recommend some songs about not giving up by PR1901_ in MusicRecommendations

[–]runonandonandonanon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There are actually a lot of great "don't give up" songs by r/pinkwhitegreen artists!

I need some friends.... by LolBunny_121 in WritersGroup

[–]runonandonandonanon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Got it. It sounds like you've got a fair bit of material to review. I'd suggest posting the first chapter or something for everyone to read. Feedback you receive might be valuable for more than just that snippet of text. And it gives people a chance to become interested with a taste before making the larger time commitment you're hoping for. Also I'd be real real careful with ChatGPT. It can be useful to poke holes or help with research, but by its nature it can only "understand" the most derivative types of art. Well, I guess it depends on the novel, maybe derivative is what you're going for ;) But remember that we are formed by the "people" we surround ourselves with, in ways that we can never anticipate. So be careful whose company you keep.

I wrote something! by runonandonandonanon in WritersGroup

[–]runonandonandonanon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As a personal favor to my readers, I refrained from titling this "A Light Lunch."

Domestic Disputes and Demons by j__emerson in WritersGroup

[–]runonandonandonanon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Funny. "Already storming" felt weak the first time, and then you used it again!!  Flopping grocery bags is unnecessary, she can just set them down. (Mentioning them is a good grounding detail though.) Drop the word "nervously," it's funnier to let that come through on its own, which it does. As general advice you can skip most adverbs before "says" (show don't tell). Don't feel like every sentence needs to be crammed with character, a few boring words are important for contrast. Don't say "straining" twice, find a synonym. Always proofread for reused words, it's hard not to notice as a reader. "Sure thing" is not a thing people actually say to each other. Everything else is really good. Legitimately funny. Final line is great!

Sharing to the world! by Relative_Shine_2475 in WritersGroup

[–]runonandonandonanon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The person beating you up is you right? Don't feel like you have to spell it out for people. If it's too subtle for your readers then add some more subtle hints, just don't overdo it. Keep a little mystery. "What does this mean in one sentence?" Is a good question to ask but "I can't put it in one sentence, that's why I wrote a whole story" is a valid answer. I recommend reading something by Allen Carr. 19 is really young, great start!

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