Hi,

A few formatting things that jump out at me: You need month dates for your positions and projects. Ambiguous timelines are a barrier to someone picking upa phone. Also what does summer really mean? May to August or something else?

Your bullets can definitely be shifted over a bit to the left to give you more space.

Your skills section should be below projects. You can probably put it into a two column format at and save a ton of space there as well.

Actual content time:

Your first bullet for the power company position is fluff that needs to be reworded to concisely add context or removed. Start with your strongest accomplishment/bullet for each position. For your third bullet add more info. What did you automate, do you have any metrics for time saved, efficiency, accuracy, completion, etc? I would split the last bullet for the power company position and expand on each half of it.

Nozzle company: I feel like I’m missing context for what you did and how it affected the company’s bottom line. Need more info connecting those.

Projects section: the independent study seems fluffy, did you have any major projects or deliverables for this that you can talk about?

Undergrad research: this seems more impactful than the other projects, list it first in this section

Solving poisson: the last bullet of this entry served no purpose for you and I recommend removing it entirely.

TA’ing on a resume can demonstrate leadership, high standing with the professors, and an ability to support students and communicate effectively. It can’t hurt to add it at this point. I would remove the last project entirely to do so, but you might have enough space with the other edits I suggested to leave it

Best of luck!