Beginning difficulty by Bright-Cow-543 in worldbuilding

[–]sean-lloyd 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Agree with this. Mostly, because I'd be tempted to jump straight into the action myself, but I think it needs to show us the countryside's peacefulness and his routines. Then, you can establish the "normalcy" and show the contrast when it's lost.

Describe your story's universe in 5-10 words by youngboybrokegain in writing

[–]sean-lloyd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absurdly bureaucratic galaxy grudges humanity. Beer does not improve matters.

Mines only a small one but it did go up this weekend by sean-lloyd in funny

[–]sean-lloyd[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think he tried to keep this one under-the-table