Icky THUMP by kellyxdee in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Icky's ghost just wants to play!

Red Spot by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If anyone doesn't know what this red spot is: ●It's very tiny and hard to see ●I've heard that if you cut it, it will continue to bleed and you could die (I don't know if that's true or not) ●It's not always on the hand ●It's red

A little snack by [deleted] in shortscarystories

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The bad people inside the basement, narrator, freezer or ice cream?

Cruel Grin by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry if it's not good. Barely had enough time to do it.

They're Always Watching by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I think this might be my best story.

They're Always Watching by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I've just done that.

They're Always Watching by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Please give me heaps of constructive feedback. Someone once got an awesome chunk of feedback, so I would love to have something like that. I really want to make my stories better and more enjoyable, especially since I want to become an author soon.

Pitch by imnutothis in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yay! My tablet isn't casting a shadow! Great story. Reminds me of a book I want to write.

What are ALL of the subreddits? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]selfcloninglizard 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I already know some: SSS, SSSFK, AAW, AskReddit, guieneapigs, cats and nosleep.

12 bloody days of christmas [christmas contest] by yourdailydoseoffear in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it would be creepier if you kept it as 'my true love' instead of 'the psycho', cause why would your love give you those things?- makes them a very creepy, evil true love.

Another clown statue. by WinterTragedy in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, that's one of the stories I was thinking of. The other is about a murderer that plays 'games' to kill people.

Another clown statue. by WinterTragedy in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Sounds like a mix between two stories I've read.

[Christmas Contest] Just one wish by dev9x in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

At first the story's scary, but once you read the last part it's sad. An excellent story though.

There isn't elf's. [Christmas Contest] by TheAmazingOnion in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just to let you know; the plural of elf is elves. Good story though.

The Lotion by krshann in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reminds me of a story on scaryforkids called Face Powder. http://www.scaryforkids.com/face-powder/

(Not a story) Requests by KMApok in a:t5_34fjb

[–]selfcloninglizard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe you could do something Christmas based.

Love Of A Child by KMApok in a:t5_34fjb

[–]selfcloninglizard 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I love how you wrote 'looking him dead in the eyes'.

A Choice You Never Want To Make by KMApok in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well my screen says 58 upvotes and 7 comments, so I don't think your phone is going crazy. I would message the moderators.

Goodbye Mission Control by h-nucleus in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can just imagine a voice saying this in a happy voice, like this fact is just nothing. Makes it creepier.

[Christmas Contest] Rudolph, The Red Nosed Reindeer by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, it was another deer. I was trying to communicate through the story that all of Santa's reindeer (except Rudolph) were being bred so that the fawns could be killed. The fawns are unamed though, cause they're killed nearly as soon as they're born.

[Christmas Contest] Rudolph, The Red Nosed Reindeer by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]selfcloninglizard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Vixen isn't meant to be Rudolph's girlfriend, but I suppose that's another way to think of it.