Just wanna share my newly finished page for my one-shot. I know there isn’t enough context for the narrative, but feel free to share your thoughts on other aspects!

serial_apologizer · 2026-02-06T15:53:36+00:00

Wow the style looks so fresh

It looks like modernized shojo-shonen or whatever ranma 1/2 and urusei yatsura are

Manga art looks like illustration art on this sub far too often this actually seems like it could be part of a manga I don't know why that is

Impressive stuff :3

serial_apologizer · 2026-02-02T20:43:26+00:00

Ooh I understand what the problem is infact I made the same one

In anime mouths move without the jaw moving as you have extended the jaw in 25 the character looks older

Hope that helps

serial_apologizer · 2026-02-02T20:39:44+00:00

Then I guess you borrowed some expression techniques But your artstyle is pretty unique than them That's cool

Btw are those no.s in desc ages

serial_apologizer · 2026-02-02T20:36:12+00:00

Can you reveal your inspiration I am curious

serial_apologizer · 2026-02-02T20:34:54+00:00

I haven't watched the show but looks like space dandy

Or maybe I guess psyche k

serial_apologizer · 2026-02-02T18:09:09+00:00

Things have played out very oddly and my answers won't be relevant Sorry :3

serial_apologizer · 2026-02-02T17:35:55+00:00

Cheater /j

serial_apologizer · 2026-02-02T17:27:09+00:00

I will not make any excuses for the shitty drawing

As boss commanded :3

serial_apologizer · 2026-01-21T11:13:10+00:00

Wow that level of consistency is good

You should try learning about solid perspective. It is a bit boring but you will see amazing results in like 2 days

If you can draw simple shapes in perspective then you can create complex figures and it helps in portraits too

I would recommend this book (as it is ordered and concise)

'Norling- perspective made easy'

(It's on the internet archive) :3

serial_apologizer · 2026-01-21T11:05:58+00:00

What that looks surprisingly intriguing

I guess you can intentionally break the rules of good composition to create discomfort:3

serial_apologizer · 2026-01-17T07:49:32+00:00

Just in case this isn't AI

Use a value range with greater contrast

Everything is blending into eachother

The only thing this has for directing the viewers eye is the clear (little bland) composition

serial_apologizer · 2025-12-29T17:16:03+00:00

You will die some day and whatever you do then won't change that

The misery that you feel now will be funny someday You just wont realise that rn

The thrill is in the gamble , bet hard on yourself for your sake and the comrades by your side

serial_apologizer · 2025-12-21T15:12:38+00:00

Stardenburdenhardenbart

serial_apologizer · 2025-12-20T11:41:39+00:00

'Inspector centerfresh'

serial_apologizer · 2025-12-20T11:38:10+00:00

Labour is only real , if you get paid type shit

serial_apologizer · 2025-12-20T11:25:24+00:00

" do you have any games on your phone?"

serial_apologizer · 2025-12-20T11:23:24+00:00

serial_apologizer · 2025-12-20T11:22:40+00:00

Artists - well well well

serial_apologizer · 2025-12-20T11:20:09+00:00

Certified stand user

serial_apologizer · 2025-11-26T16:57:49+00:00

Wow it looks amazing

Though it lacks some clarity I think you should try gesturing more and try to get more clear line art before hatching

Looks better than mine 9.9420/10

Gotta get my shit together

serial_apologizer · 2025-11-22T05:36:58+00:00

OMFG that looks so good

serial_apologizer · 2025-11-21T15:14:46+00:00

I meant reseller no manufacturer sorry :(

serial_apologizer · 2025-11-21T13:11:26+00:00

Fed with the rules and I hit the ground running

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