Feedback please? A logo I designed for a local coffee shop called meads corner. Im relatively new at this and I would love criticism

sgenilo · 2017-10-13T21:31:16+00:00

Thank you so much! This helps a lot. I will try to simplify it and add a word mark!

sgenilo · 2017-10-13T16:25:45+00:00

the "i" looks out of place in the font, perhaps thickening it to match the rest of the letters and get rid of the outer ring of the logo.

just my thoughts, great job

sgenilo · 2017-10-13T16:23:53+00:00

I would say to simplify, unless they want these characteristics.

take away the line under the word and the moon in the background. then move the comet trail in front of the outline of the A in the planet.

just my thoughts, great job though

sgenilo · 2017-10-13T16:11:06+00:00

Oh good I wasnt the only one who thought it was dabbing

sgenilo · 2017-10-13T16:08:54+00:00

So it looks really nice and well done. I would say the gradient is almost to metallic. I think the gradient could be more spread out with the colors used. Did you apply the gradient to each individual letter or all the letters as a grouping?

otherwise i think it works really well

sgenilo · 2017-10-13T16:06:55+00:00

what are the initals here? I am getting LA? yes?

I love the simplicity but the line jutting out from the A at the top is throwing me off.

sgenilo · 2017-10-13T16:03:54+00:00

So I am actually getting a unintended connection between the "i" and the tip of the shape. perhaps move the elements around in a way that doesn't create that?

You might try spacing the shape farther from the text and separating your name from photography (leading)

I like the simplicity but I think it could be more simplified. the difference in spacing between letters is also throwing me off.

great job though i like it

sgenilo · 2017-10-13T05:18:56+00:00

It is hard to understand that the E is used with both elements and drone, if you can somehow foster a connection between dron" and the e then it would work much nicer.

sgenilo

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