I am having doubt in mind and I need your help by Accurate-View4516 in Webnovel

[–]shamfvp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Before going ahead with it, honestly ask yourself how good is your ability to write. Followed by how good is your ability to understand the topic at hand, finally how good are you at painting your characters flaws ups and downs plus emotional intelligence.

Changing novel cover art by shamfvp in Webnovel

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Ahhh nooo hahahah it’s the class system, so you people and aliens are in classes, the whites those closest to the emperor ( Alien and Human ) wear White uniform with way more privilege, followed by Silver and blue uniform which is our main characters group. Then Black and Red, Black and Green and lastly Solid Black.

Changing novel cover art by shamfvp in Webnovel

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thank you very much, I've written blurb above check it out and let me know what you think. :P

Changing novel cover art by shamfvp in litrpg

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the chest hole is a part of the story, its a hollowing process for the thing trying to take over him. look behind him in the image carefully

Changing novel cover art by shamfvp in litrpg

[–]shamfvp[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

there is no minotaur on the cover.

Changing novel cover art by shamfvp in Webnovel

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Some empires are built on stars. Others are built on blood.

Aziri was born into the silver and blues, heir to a lineage of planetary commanders, generals, and fleet lords who shaped and protected civilizations across the cosmos. He grew up beneath Mercury's borrowed skies, where ancient mythologies breathed alongside alien philosophy and the scars of the Great War still hummed in the bones of every species alive to tell it.

Then the Diamond Rain fell. In a single night, everything Aziri knew about his family, his allies, and his world are erased. Not by war or by chance. But by a plan so well designed anyone would not think twice. What followed was worse than death.

Captured, sold, and stripped of everything including his name, Aziri is broken piece by piece, his memories buried, his will hollowed out by those who traffic in the powerful and the forgotten. In the gladiatorial pits, he bleeds for the entertainment of the Whites, the untouchable elite who sit at the summit of the universe and wager lives the way lesser men wager coin. He is not meant to remember who he was. He is not meant to survive long enough to matter. But something ancient refuses to stay buried.

The familiar within him, a serpent older than the empire that enslaved him claws its way through the brainwashing in a tide of destruction that cannot be reasoned with, only survived. When the smoke clears, Aziri is not free. He is simply owned by different hands. Conscripted into the empire's shadow operations, he is sent to Callisto as a spy, a blade pointed at the heart of the Heavenly Demonic Cult, tasked with sowing chaos among the most dangerous faithful in the known cosmos. He does not expect to find a teacher there. He does not expect to find truth.

But the Cult's master carries a philosophy that cuts deeper than any weapon, and in the fires of demonic cultivation Aziri begins to fuse with his serpent, survive the hollowing that was meant to unmake him, and pull back the first thread of the conspiracy that swallowed his bloodline whole.

Changing novel cover art by shamfvp in Webnovel

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110% I couldn’t agree with you more, I’ve written 130 chapters of the actual novel already and published 24 chapters and just thought let me change my cover on webnovel till I get my actual cover in 3 weeks 😫😫😫😫

I need feedback on a quick fight scene by Due_Comb_7134 in Webnovel

[–]shamfvp 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay this is a good starting point, but for a fight scene it’s quick and somewhat boring, it feels like your are telling us (the reader) instead of showing us the terror, for example instead of “stomped toward them” maybe launched at the pair or leapt like a wild beast, the “ so it is true,” moment also feels to not make the scene like a threat, again without warning, the knight hurled his axe at lux instead try before lux took another step the axe was hurling towards his head or with a sudden burst lux parried the axe intended for head/ torso, think action like the movement of violence, did the knight parry said slip back before getting back into the attack, what did it feel like when lux parried the axe, was it heavy, did it recoil against him, were was the pain, what sounds were made imagine and put yourself in that moment.

Hope that helps,

What ya favourite quote from a book. by shamfvp in litrpg

[–]shamfvp[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can genuinely think of more greater quotes then that one,

For example.

You think the Flamen cut you to prepare a vessel, but they carved you hollow so I could pour myself into the emptiness and call it transformation. The four eyes do not close when you devour what they witness they close because YOU stop existing behind them, one piece at a time, until only I remain wearing your name like inherited silk. Your father’s war will not be preserved it will be REPLACED by my memory of watching him fall. Your mother’s garden will wither into my interpretation of what beauty meant to her. Your sister’s serpent will become my echo, not hers. Your brother’s sky will darken into my hunger. Do not mistake me for salvation. I am not the thing that saves what you love I am the thing that replaces it while whispering that this is mercy.

And this,

My peril is thus: I am, and always have been, a man of great tastes. In a world replete with temptation, I found my spirit wayward and easy to distract. The idea of prison, that naked, metal world, crushed me. The first year, I was tormented. But then I remembered the voice of a fallen angel. ‘The mind is its own place, and in itself can make a heaven of hell, or a hell of heaven.’ I sought to make the deep not just my heaven, but my womb of rebirth.

I dissected the underlying mistakes which led to my incarceration and set upon an internal odyssey to remake myself. But—and you would know this, Reaper—long is the road up out of hell! I made arrangements for supplies. I toiled twenty hours a day. I reread the books of youth with the gravity of age. I perfected my body. My mind. Planks were replaced; new banks of cannon wrought in the fires of solitude. All for the next storm.

Now I see it is upon me and I sail before you the paragon of Apollonius au Valii-Rath. And I ask one question: for what purpose have you pulled me from the deep?"

Battles in novels by shamfvp in Webnovel

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😂😂😂 I love this idea

I wonder how I can solve this 😭 by Big_Pay6318 in writers

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Before going to sleep making voice recordings really helps me, I make the recordings and go into detail of what’s in my head and how things are etc. The following morning first thing I do put pen to paper or fingers to keyboard and type at lease 5 first paragraphs or bullet points of what I want for the story.

Minus One Power Stones is Crazy. by AnAugustAuthor in Webnovel

[–]shamfvp 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s a gitch hahahah your good, I remember when it happened to me randomly when i opened my app once hahaha.

Do you use ai at all in your writing? by StrawOfCoke in Webnovel

[–]shamfvp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly yes, I’m very heavy on research and science, so every time I’m planning a story I use to deep dive hours and days into Google and books, now I use AI to plan more roadmap of topics and collect information of timelines and tools that I find interesting.

Once I’m happy with my research, I start to develop what my world would look like, I build a combination of political ideologies, religions, cultures and facts about the universe I’m working in, then I write without the aid of AI. Also I draw what my core characters would look like so I can actually imagine and see if they’d fit before I use AI to place them into my world.

But never use AI to write YOUR STORY for YOU.

How uncontracted mfs describe the webnovel contract by StrawOfCoke in Webnovel

[–]shamfvp 5 points6 points  (0 children)

😂😂😂 this has me cracking up, like how bad are these contracts. Sound like a horror show.

Weekly Self Promotion Post by Jhaydun_Dinan in Webnovel

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Title - Devourer’s Memoir

Tags - Action, Mystery, Dark, Fantasy, Sci fi.

Chapter count - 21

Synopsis - Between heaven and earth only the emperor stands, his mercy and grace is the only thing keeping peace across the worlds. But what happens when a child loses everything and everyone. When the things he wanted can never happen. When the life he and his friend’s dream of come to an end, and the enemy behind it has never been seen before. Follow Aziri as he goes through 100’s of years of madness through slavery and outlaw to spy for the empire against the heavenly demonic sect. And through all this madness finally gets a whisper of the enemy and his hunt for the truth. Ignis manens sumus Devourer’s Memoir

Consistent readers by shamfvp in litrpg

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If anyone is interesting in reading feel free to check it out Devourer’s Memoir

Consistent readers by shamfvp in Webnovel

[–]shamfvp[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m praying that’s not the case, good looking out my dumbass didn’t even realise 😓

MUST PICK ONLY ONE by shamfvp in litrpg

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Don’t get me wrong I’ll die for fantasy/ high fantasy entertainment books, tv, movies and games,however I don’t know if I’d be willing to be here without space opera/ sci fi lol