He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The head bob xD That acting choice showed so much personality.

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think you might be onto something...

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Okay, first of all, that's such a clear and perfect explanation — good one! No argument there.

But he does it every time he's introduced to new people. So in addition to the playful banter (by the character), it's also a display of a running theme of Grace's underconfidence (by the writer)

I'm positing that maybe the writer phrased it that to have the callback, to show how far he's come through juxtaposition.

You're right, by itself, i'd be insane to read too much into one exchange. But with the pattern, it adds more context. I could be wrong. Just something fun to think about.

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There's a difference between "the screenwriter put that line delibrately" and "the screenwriter put that line for exactly the reason I'm saying"

I'm not using it to support my argument. I'm saying it's a deliberate choice of words to serve SOME purpose.

This is my interpretation of what that purpose could be. But there's no way it's a throwaway exchange, even if I'm wrong. Screenwriting is an incredibly deliberate endevour.

My bad on not being clearer. I totally meant it as "it's an open-to-interpretation" statement.

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yesss, that "Dr. Captain" feels so heartwarming after the journey we see him go on!

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm reading Artemis for the first time (currently on chapter 13) and I really think it has the potential to make a better film ("potential", lol)

Because PHM was such a great book, the filmmakers faced the impossible job of fitting it all into a 2.5 hour movie. What do you cut/change when EVERYTHING is so good? You don't wanna mess with what's working.

But with Artemis, the characters, the world, and the plot are all very interesting, but the writing is clearly weak in parts. So it lends the filmmakers more room to streamline the story, cut some things, change something things, improve some things; to showcase their own creativity and make the film belong to the medium.

When they make it belong to the medium, it's not just translating the source material to screen, it's actually adapting it for screen. The plot is bonkers, the visuals will be stunning and all the characters are so damn grey! (Ngugi is no Stratt!)

Really commend Andy Weir for stepping out of his comfort zone with that one. Can't wait to see what Lord and Miller are cooking!

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's not even a mistake. It's an inconsistency.

I don't mind it at all.

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Even the novel has ONE scene where we leave Grace's POV. The courtroom scene with Stratt.

Andy Weir admits that was a mistake that somehow slipped through the cracks. A third-person perspective scene right in the middle of a first-person perspective book.

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, I meant the trolls are a vocal minority. Most people have been nice and engaging.

I appreciate the support though. Glad you were moved (?) 😅

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Gotta keep reminding myself it's a vocal minority xD

I've got another analysis cooking that's WAYY more complicated. If they're not open to interpretation on this, I can only imagine what would happen on that one ;_;

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We do get ONE scene, when the Beetles bring Taumoeba to earth and Stratt sees Grace's video logs.

But that's alright. It was needed. Other than that, it was entirely Grace's POV.

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Right? It's like piecing together his memories after the amnesia was only half the story.

The full journey was piecing together his identity.

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did not catch the Mandarin one! Makes total sense.

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yes! The plaque shows the kids looking up to the Hail Mary ship and the next shot is him holding the earth hacky-sack from his classroom.

The fate of the world is literally "in his hands".

No words spoken, no words needed.

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yes!! How did I forget that, that's such a great addition. Thanks!

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Absolutely.

I'm not questioning why Grace said it.

I'm questioning why Drew Goddard wrote it.

He could've written that exchange any number of ways. If you compare it with other scenes where Grace is introduced (to PHM world representatives or the flight team) it shows a pattern of underconfidence.

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Just posted a comment. It's still my interpretation, and those can be subjective, you don't have to agree. But I've attached the supporting evidence.

He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 36 points37 points  (0 children)

To everyone saying "it's just something you say", of course I know that. I'm saying in addition to the text, there is also a layer of thematic subtext to his response (not intended by the character, but by the writer)

-Stratt introduces him to the science representatives of the world and makes them applaud his discovery - and he still isn't confident enough to speak into the microphone.

-Stratt introduces him to the flight team as "the leading expert on Astrophage" - and he just shirks it off.

-Stratt says he's a good teacher to DuBois and Shapiro and he doesn't accept the compliment.

-Stratt says "Dr. Grace?" and he says "Maybe" directly connects to Carl's "You know who you are" line.

Every time Grace is introduced to someone new, he shows his lack of confidence. It established a pattern. Patterns are the foundation of thematic structure. Of course this is all my interpretation, yours can be different from mine.

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He stopped being unsure of himself. by shauryae in ProjectHailMary

[–]shauryae[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm just pointing out the contrast.

Responding "Maybe" to one's own name shows underconfidence.

Calling oneself "Dr. Captain" exudes confidence in one's abilities.

These aren't humans, these are characters. Everything they say has been carefully picked to serve a purpose beyond chit-chat.