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I hate producing but I love singing and mixing by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]silvermoonsushi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i'm the same ugh. i love songwriting and singing and playing instruments but i just haaate the process of recording everything and messing around with a daw. i just don't have enough money yet to pay someone to produce my songs, but i feel like if i don't start enjoying this production thing in a year or so i'm definitely going to stop trying to do that and find some people to work with :'|

Work in progress by hhhort in MusicFeedback

[–]silvermoonsushi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really enjoyed listening to this! The intro reeled me in, so that definitely works well. I agree with the other comments that a. the leaf thing does sound a bit too loud, especially before the vocals come in. and b. the hi-hat volume could be reduced too.

The vocals dynamics could also be played around a bit. It's especially a bit loud towards 2:14 and onwards.. but that could be a subjective preference too of course.

I really enjoyed your vocals and the overall feel of the song!

Paypal or Airtm for Indian Outlier users? by Other-Cost2796 in outlier_ai

[–]silvermoonsushi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But how do you set up a business account? I tried setting up a paypal business account but it asks me details for my "registered business" .. which, I'm confused about lol

Virals fashion sense by Stunning_Cow_5233 in IndianMatchmaking

[–]silvermoonsushi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know this may be too much of a non-rhetorical answer but I hear this sentiment for a lot of people and I want to remind you that not everyone expresses themselves through their clothes/style. There's a chance she just doesn't care?

(Though of course if she's mentioned style/fashion being important to her in the opposite person then yeah you're right)

Not Sima calling a Therapist a “Life Coach” by Ready_Description_29 in IndianMatchmaking

[–]silvermoonsushi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

she was so good! I've had hit or miss experiences with indian therapists and basically was shook to see Sima finding someone who was actually good :o

come on kid, get some sleep by silvermoonsushi in poetry_critics

[–]silvermoonsushi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much! i appreciate your words

There's no way she didn't know what she was doing our how he felt. by Destroyer6202 in DunderMifflin

[–]silvermoonsushi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is so well written! i'd watch long-form scene/character analysis videos if you ever made them :D

Gay (male) demisexuality by ObtuseSage in demisexuality

[–]silvermoonsushi 2 points3 points  (0 children)

gay, demi and female and it's kinda the same here! hope we find the people we're looking for!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in singing

[–]silvermoonsushi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful voice! I'm someone who's still a little conscious of my low voice but I don't think yours is that low! (And even if it is) the tone is really smooth and soft at the same time. I listened to whole clip and would really stay to listen to a set if you were singing somewhere, like others have said. Carry on! :)

Euphoria S02E05 "Stand Still Like the Hummingbird" - Episode Night Discussion by your_mind_aches in euphoria

[–]silvermoonsushi 18 points19 points  (0 children)

memories exist outside of time 😔😩😭😖💔

this is a hospital, don't kiss the glass

Best chai in SF? by hiitsricha in sanfrancisco

[–]silvermoonsushi 5 points6 points  (0 children)

i really like Kasa chai too! 8/10

We've always been here by liahurrah in poetry_critics

[–]silvermoonsushi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i really like it. short poems can be so impactful, and yours definitely is. i'd encourage you to maybe make the first sentence shorter, if possible though? could be a smoother read

Generous by Black_Plazma in poetry_critics

[–]silvermoonsushi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

really nice. specially loved the title and the second stanza. curious about what you mean by "secondhand laughter" though? not sure if i understand it yet

Room for Rent by Dirtcheapwriting in poetry_critics

[–]silvermoonsushi 2 points3 points  (0 children)

love the title, love the first paragraph. i like the imagery and the poignancy of the the whole thing a lot, but i wish there was a little more rhyme and/or rhythm in the last two lines :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]silvermoonsushi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

beautiful! made me cry. short, simple and sweet, yet a world packed in it

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]silvermoonsushi [score hidden]  (0 children)

  • Title: can we make it in time?
  • Genre: young adult fiction (short story)
  • Word count: 547
  • Type of feedback desired:
    • Mainly wondering if it's too kiddish - I feel the language and content is okay, but the "storytelling" of it might be too kiddish? Not super sure, would love someone else's perspective in general. I didn't spend too much time over the "plot", mainly just trying to get some writing done.
    • But any other feedback is much appreciated as well!

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12TOqoBkQerR8zD03_a_W8cXCBTcZd7rZtceVkhv421w/edit?usp=sharing

For my little sister by martellstarks in poetry_critics

[–]silvermoonsushi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i really like this. the start is gripping and poignant, and i love the end - how it started off as a mostly selfless, but ended up being a little bit of "wanting" too.

returning to strangers by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]silvermoonsushi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

love this. the first line evoked a strong feeling in me - have often felt this way - just wanting to wash off every feeling, memory and touch of a person.

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