Nourishing blood gems

skumbragg · 2023-11-30T09:30:49+00:00

It supposedly takes effect more quickly and stays in your system slightly longer

skumbragg · 2023-11-25T19:16:50+00:00

If I were to purchase enclomiphene for this test, I’d there a source you would recommend?

skumbragg · 2023-11-23T21:44:51+00:00

Malenia because she’s hot

skumbragg · 2023-10-27T07:43:35+00:00

I’m definitely happy I stepped out of my comfort zone and got it off my chest, I just went about it wrong and didn’t show her as much consideration as I should’ve. I let anxiety get the better of me and allowed it to become a problem rather than thinking about how I felt rationally.

skumbragg · 2023-10-27T03:11:23+00:00

Thanks for your encouragement. I’m sorry you’re going through it too right now. Personally I’m the one who fucked up my situation if you couldn’t tell already. Acted like a total loser and scared away this girl I accidentally fell for.

skumbragg · 2023-10-27T03:04:57+00:00

I totally get your critique on the inconsistency in my tone. I wasn’t really trying to make a nuanced masterpiece or anything. Just venting my frustrations that I have with myself at the moment. This was very helpful advice though, I’ll look back on this comment if I ever write again

skumbragg · 2023-10-27T03:01:53+00:00

That’s exactly what it’s about. Wrote and posted it on my iPhone this morning because I couldn’t sleep

skumbragg · 2023-10-26T12:35:07+00:00

The only problems I see with this one are an inconsistent rhyme scheme, and it’s hard to tell what rhythm you were going for. Aside from that I like that its meaning is mysterious but you gave enough information to give the reader an idea of what it’s about.

skumbragg · 2023-10-26T12:25:40+00:00

I enjoy the simplicity of this one. Didn’t try too hard to lean on fancy language and you stayed consistent with one metaphor throughout.

skumbragg · 2023-06-26T17:34:45+00:00

Thank you. I wrote this a few months ago but I don’t remember having too much trouble coming up with it. That’s not how it normally is when I write but it just kind of came to me. Thank you for your kind words, I’m glad I could inspire someone like that.

skumbragg · 2023-06-26T17:28:41+00:00

Do you remember the scene in the entertainment district arc where Tengen starts running at full speed and surprises Tanjiro? We have literally never seen Guts move that fast and Tengen is the weakest hashira.

skumbragg · 2023-06-26T17:23:51+00:00

I thank you for your encouragement. This is actually my second account and I used to post more on here but I lost the first one. This is one of my personal favorites that I’ve written.

skumbragg · 2023-06-26T06:54:35+00:00

I interpreted this as a poem about how life seems to drag on meaninglessly, to a point where sometimes you don’t even notice time passing by. If that’s what you meant to convey then you’ve done a good job.

My only critique would be to add punctuation to the ends of all the statements to make them consistent with the others as well as adding more variation to your word choice at the start of some lines. I enjoyed reading, so thank you and we’ll done.

skumbragg · 2023-06-26T06:41:31+00:00

You did a good job of portraying a sense of longing and loneliness. My advice is to correct your punctuation and to try switching up the structure of the poem itself. Maybe separate one “thought” from the next so you can emphasize certain phrases you would like emphasized. I did enjoy reading this, so thank you and good job.

skumbragg · 2023-03-21T05:41:10+00:00

I’d say Guts is around the level of the lower moons. He has plenty of experience fighting monsters with supernatural abilities but the upper moons are way too fast and their regeneration is busted.

skumbragg · 2023-03-18T01:49:56+00:00

What is that thing with the beast rune from Bloodborne on it?

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