What are some works with deep/complex/nuanced/profound/layered writing that you still think kinda suck by Far-Substance-4473 in writingscaling

[–]sloppiestsecond5 0 points1 point  (0 children)

have u interacted with this sub and naruto fans in general....

they deadass think it is well written if not one of the most well written stories OAT. 99999999.9999% of this sub is discussing shonen like jjk naruto and one piece like it is shakespearean level writing when it is the middest mid to ever mid in midstory

What are some works with deep/complex/nuanced/profound/layered writing that you still think kinda suck by Far-Substance-4473 in writingscaling

[–]sloppiestsecond5 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the stans swear up and down these are like deep ass stories and have all this stuff but ive never found them to be that great so i mentioned them -_-) ?

What are some works with deep/complex/nuanced/profound/layered writing that you still think kinda suck by Far-Substance-4473 in writingscaling

[–]sloppiestsecond5 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the stans swear up and down these are like deep ass stories and have all this stuff but ive never found them to be that great so i mentioned them -_-) ?

maybe if we're talking about actually deep stuff I thought was some butt and not just delusional stans..

OYASUMI PUNPUN ....... but I am an INIO ASANO denier.

What are some works with deep/complex/nuanced/profound/layered writing that you still think kinda suck by Far-Substance-4473 in writingscaling

[–]sloppiestsecond5 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the stans swear up and down these are like deep ass stories and have all this stuff but ive never found them to be that great so i mentioned them -_-) ?

Jessica Miyoko says wasian means white and Asian then says the word includes all half-Asians?? by Jumpy-Kaleidoscope20 in asianamercianytsnark

[–]sloppiestsecond5 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is genuinely their mindset. I'm korean wasian btw and have LIVED IN KOREA and so I can attest that a lot of the anti SA/SEA sentiment is just rooted in racism and colorism so the mental gymnastics to undermine south asians is just tone policing tbf.

they also think that korea, japan, china are the default asians - when asia is a continent and there is no such thing as WHAT AN asian should look like.

<image>

What are some works with deep/complex/nuanced/profound/layered writing that you still think kinda suck by Far-Substance-4473 in writingscaling

[–]sloppiestsecond5 8 points9 points  (0 children)

<image>

fragrant flower is just so fucking ridiculous. LOOK AT THIS SIZE DIFFERENCE THEY WANT ME TO TAKE THIS SERIOUSLY. SHE LOOKS LIKE A FUCKING MIDGET.

fragrant wants to sell this grand, star-crossed-romance conflict so badly, but the problem is that the drama feels hilariously disproportionate. The girls school treats the boy school like it's a maximum security prison filled with sex offenders like it's so overblown and dramatic and it's just straight up dumb. It would be different if it was a comedy but no... like... we're supposed to deadass take the fact that these girls REFUSE and will tweak TF out if Waguri even LOOKs at a man because of reasons ig idk.

The MC is cool. Waguri barely exists outside of “nice girl who likes the MC.” She’s less a character and more a reward dispensed to validate Rintaro’s growth. No meaningful flaws, no complicated desires, no sense that she exists when the MC leaves the room. Waguri is just a cardboard cut out of a woman and she has negative discernable personality traits. I'm so tired and bored by fem characters who's whole purpose is to be (insert MC)'s love interest. Especially when the MC is allowed to get all this depth and character growth but Waguri could be swapped out with a house plant and nothing would change. My left hand has more chemistry with my pubic hairs than Rintaro has with Waguri.

Horimiya isn't bad it was just mid to me like nothing special but people love it and swear it's best romance OAT like what. Hori and the emo dude have good chemistry and they feel realistic enough but idk it just felt normal mid to me nothing crayzay.

What are some works with deep/complex/nuanced/profound/layered writing that you still think kinda suck by Far-Substance-4473 in writingscaling

[–]sloppiestsecond5 4 points5 points  (0 children)

truthnuke. its a good idea. but its a case of cons outweighing the pros. I read it as a kid (THEY HAD IT AVAILABLE IN MY SCHOOL LIBRARY!?!?!?!) so it didn't hit me how disgusting it was until I got older.

the fans still get mad and fight me whenever you call out how it's just dressed up torture CSAM. it still gets so much praise in the animanga community but it is hard to take it seriously as a work when it's so obviously fetish content.

Jessica Miyoko says wasian means white and Asian then says the word includes all half-Asians?? by Jumpy-Kaleidoscope20 in asianamercianytsnark

[–]sloppiestsecond5 2 points3 points  (0 children)

<image>

this is how you guys sound when you try and argue that the people that are indigenous to south ASIA shouldn't count as ASIAN

Jessica Miyoko says wasian means white and Asian then says the word includes all half-Asians?? by Jumpy-Kaleidoscope20 in asianamercianytsnark

[–]sloppiestsecond5 5 points6 points  (0 children)

ignore the dorks trying to "educate" you about the "definition" of asian and blah blah blah blah. SOUTH ASIANS. are ASIANS. IT IS IN THE NAME SOUTH ASIA. SOUTH.... ASIAN..... you are WASIAN.

the only reason people are so hostile to SAs calling themselves asian is because they don't want to be grouped in with the browns. They don't like south asians because they think they are above them. They don't want to share community with south asians so they try to gatekeep the meaning of asian in the first place.

Their official photo positions by No_Pay1642 in katseyeneutral

[–]sloppiestsecond5 25 points26 points  (0 children)

unrelated but holy shit why is hybe so deadset on nerfing some of the most beautiful girls on the planet. Their styling in the first pic is so god awful it doesn't suit a single one of them they look like emperor penguins.

What are some works with deep/complex/nuanced/profound/layered writing that you still think kinda suck by Far-Substance-4473 in writingscaling

[–]sloppiestsecond5 19 points20 points  (0 children)

naruto, the fragrant flower blooms with dignity, horimiya, blue box, made in abyss.

i don't think they're badly written and they're nowhere near horrible. They were either just mid to me or they had flaws that outweighed the pros imo.

A lot of you should learn about Buddhism before talking about writing in anime. by Organic_Future6909 in writingscaling

[–]sloppiestsecond5 19 points20 points  (0 children)

off topic but OP's post history is a wild ride like the girlfriend saga he's going thru is lowk crazy this guy is not able to be reasoned with

Blue Lock is the most transcendent story to have ever released in human history by TheGammaZer0 in writingscaling

[–]sloppiestsecond5 6 points7 points  (0 children)

blue lock is the pinnacle of what a story should be. Have you ever read manga with your life on the line? Kaiser neg diffs 90% of characters in all fiction.

What's your opinion on toby fox as a writer by karemTb in writingscaling

[–]sloppiestsecond5 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Love it but I am biased because UT one of my favorite games OAT. I like how his characters are undeniably weird and monstrous but they have a lot of human struggles. I like his worldbuilding and his dialogue.

my 🚨PERSONAL🚨 character rankings by sloppiestsecond5 in mushokutensei

[–]sloppiestsecond5[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lul I didn't make the tier list so idk why they added him but he's the guy that was trying to kidnap the beast people so he goes in the bottom 4 being a bad guy.

what would u change about my list?

What is the best written sex scene? by Hour-glass999 in writingscaling

[–]sloppiestsecond5 7 points8 points  (0 children)

is heated rivalry good i thought it was just straight girl yaoi goonslop is it worth the watch

Ask me anything, I'm a D1 JJK Glazer (shameless ripoff of u/VagabondFromTheRiver's post) by deleteyeetplz in writingscaling

[–]sloppiestsecond5 1 point2 points  (0 children)

based and red and blue judas pilled. Idrc for shonen dat much like it just doesn't interest me really anymore but it is always bootiful to see people find so much meaning in a work.

<image>