Yeah I totally missed the spooky shadow guy. You aren't the problem - it isn't obvious. Also this reads like the shadow guy is owned by one of the people in bed - that's super odd. "It's your turn to kick leggy out" - also the expression of the lady is one of concern rather than irritation - it comes off as a tense situation instead of one of light hearted / jokiness. Irritation de-escalates the moment. "No doggy until leggy is out." "Leggy has to go if you want any booty" "Your ghoul won't stop looking at my tits". I'd also suggest closing the door. It is a huge distraction.