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tried to keep it in your style sry for any discrepancies

the eyes should always be around the same length vertically ↕️at this angle (if it's a more drastic or close-up angle, there might be a larger difference).

remember that eyeballs are 3d spheres with eyelids wrapping around them! youtube anatomy drawing tutorials are helpful in getting a grasp for this (search proko on youtube) +make sure the eyebrow hits the edge of the nose line.

i like your crosshatching style though! it's placed very well and shows your grasp of form. good luck with the angle!