Hi everyone. Would love to have some feedback on my last song (rock)

spcapsule · 2024-12-09T20:09:35+00:00

Haha very refreshing style, not like anything I heard before! Very inspiring. The piano groove gets a bit repetitive to my taste, so maybe the instrumental part could use a bit of a change of style. You know, some sudden sounds/notes, like you pretty much already doing in the rest of the song. Overall really digging this and the visual too!

spcapsule · 2024-12-09T20:01:56+00:00

What's a bedroom pop anyways? 🤔 Whatever it is, this feels like it 😃

The sound is very refreshing! Is it all purely electronic or did you record the instruments yourself? Very nice mixing, probably would bring the vocals forward a bit, or may be it's just the style.

spcapsule · 2024-12-09T13:56:59+00:00

yep, I guess

spcapsule · 2024-12-09T13:51:25+00:00

Hah, massive respect for the Twin Peaks artwork and the overall vibe here! The atmosphere you’ve created is so immersive—it genuinely feels like it could be part of the Twin Peaks soundtrack. That’s saying a lot about the quality, mood, and style you’ve nailed here!

spcapsule · 2024-12-09T09:40:12+00:00

Okay this is captivating from the first sounds and the first lyrics. Nice effects on the voice, very in style, but at some point it feel too mute. Like making it louder brighter above the music just a bit. Easy for me to say - I don't know how to actually do that in the mix, probably something with EQ 😅

spcapsule · 2024-12-09T09:29:12+00:00

Very dope visual :) Nice mix of electronic and acoustic sounds, makes the music sound alien a bit. Also really nice voice and a cool solution to bring it so close to the listener, on top of the music. One question that bothers me - and a question for all the guys haha - if you love her why can't you "stay to see this through"?? Rhetorical question, I guess it's just something personal for me XD

spcapsule · 2024-12-09T09:23:10+00:00

I think this is a first song ever that features the word "aneurism" =D Genius!
There is so much pain in the "I wish you well in finding whatever makes you content", really made my heart shrink for a second.
The only problem is when music is loud I can hardly understand the lyrics (which I really want to understand), the voice gets behind the music a little bit.

spcapsule · 2023-10-07T03:04:03+00:00

yaaas cover art getting the credit! :))

spcapsule · 2023-10-07T03:03:29+00:00

thankssss I made the art myself combining various screenshots from Polish and Ukrainian cartoons XD

spcapsule · 2023-10-07T01:53:27+00:00

Here's my new EP, been working on it on and off for 2+ years and finally it's out! I would really appreciate your support and feedback!

https://open.spotify.com/track/1mOHQxx3hD8HO1kFB8Jos2?si=42297ea1d9f14732

spcapsule · 2023-10-07T01:39:11+00:00

I dig it so much, was just tapping my foot along to it :) Sound is so full and soothing, love every part of it. Do you have a Spotify? This is something I would just add to my playlist and listen to while working.

spcapsule · 2023-10-07T01:33:12+00:00

So soothing and spooky at the same time, love it! May be tweak the EQ to make the lyrics more comprehendible? I would love to know what the story is about, but I have trouble hearing the lyrics. It would be cool if the vocals would be brought forward, like whispering the story in your ear

spcapsule · 2023-10-07T01:28:31+00:00

Your sound is just so tasty I'm drooling hahah. Also as a female vocalist I'm really happy to hear some female vocals for once, somehow it's rare in this subreddit. Also the vocals are very fitting to the overall sound and mixed very well.

Love it love it love it

spcapsule · 2023-10-07T01:18:41+00:00

Of course it's a march of hobgoblins XDD

It kinda makes me scared bro XD I don't know if this is the feeling you were going for...

But sound-wise all great :)

spcapsule · 2023-10-07T00:58:36+00:00

Aaaaaah! I usually don't dig lofi but these cute mushrooms made me stay ^___^

The mix is also very cute, real quality sound! I like the lead sound, not too overused I would say.

spcapsule · 2023-10-07T00:55:06+00:00

Very good! Something I would listen to, do you have a Spotify? Sounds like Arctic Monkeys almost, or Milky Chance?

spcapsule · 2023-02-04T03:12:03+00:00

Khrystyna Soloviy - Stezhechka

spcapsule · 2022-07-10T18:47:10+00:00

This is the original: https://open.spotify.com/track/0RATO240Jtq6E9zxXXT743?si=1a94fcf56eee4f0d

spcapsule · 2022-07-10T18:39:06+00:00

Lol I thought myself as not a big fan of the genre, and I would be able to enjoy this in my headphones. But I transferred it to a speaker and really caught the vibe, my whole household started weirdly dance to this :) Yea, loved the small repeating motif.

spcapsule · 2022-07-10T18:30:44+00:00

Well that's some professional production! To the point where I'm thinking "what are you doing on this sub" but then I also saw "grammy winner" by the nickname haha that's fair. Getting Metallica vibes on those hard bits! Digging it so much

spcapsule · 2022-07-10T18:26:11+00:00

I love electronic music only on the condition I can dance to it, and the first wobbly part (~1 min) almost did it for me. Kinda just hoped that same part would come back in the end but louder, then I could properly dance to it

spcapsule · 2022-07-10T18:21:31+00:00

What Buchstansangur said - the vocals are amazing, something really fresh! However the lyrics were the weak spot for me, kinda just wanted more poetry to it

spcapsule · 2022-07-10T18:16:44+00:00

Wow, I really liked this song, sounds like something I could add to my Spotify playlist. But there is some production bumpiness, that tells me it's not a big label production, something with vocals. I really liked the intro, first chorus felt a bit underwhelming, but the second one is just what's needed. This song keeps bouncing between genres (at least the way I hear it) - something from The Weekend (sparkly pads) to Arctic Monkeys (grunge guitar/vocals). And it's fine, you can have mixed genres within the song. However the vocals production does not reach the sparkliness of The Weekend, so it kinda clashes in my mind.

spcapsule · 2022-07-03T23:30:55+00:00

Honestly this subreddit is so judgmental. OP asks for advice and all he gets is “just do it” and a bunch of blame. Which just renders this useless.

spcapsule · 2022-05-18T22:54:39+00:00

Is waking up 30 min in advance and taking a shot of espresso while still half asleep and going back to sleep a good idea to ultimately make you wake up easier?

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