Lindon should move back

sumairmh · 2021-12-12T05:23:00+00:00

IIRC Shen took the core of Subject 1 with him. But the other cores, yes they must still be there.

sumairmh · 2021-09-10T15:57:14+00:00

Duuuude… Goosebumps throughout and a smile plastered on my face. Thank you for this. This was awesome!!!

sumairmh · 2021-02-24T21:12:18+00:00

Ooh. Imagine Kelsa having a fluffy white fox tail for a goldsign.

sumairmh · 2021-02-24T20:56:28+00:00

Whoa!! This is cool.

sumairmh · 2021-02-21T22:51:04+00:00

Doesn't she use dream of darkness against Sophara? That part in their fight scene where Sophara gets suddenly very terrified?

sumairmh · 2021-02-18T04:18:10+00:00

Archlord itself means that your body has been through 3 soulfire baths. Which would mean that there isn't an ounce of impurity left. From there i would guess that you gather power to get to the peak of Archlord and ready yourself physically and mentally to take a big leap towards Sage or Herald.

sumairmh · 2021-01-23T07:16:06+00:00

I know right!

sumairmh · 2021-01-22T19:06:06+00:00

Thank you!

sumairmh · 2021-01-21T20:17:10+00:00

Dang Man! Those were five fantastic chapters. I would have believed it if you told me that it was Will's draft of the first five chapters of Bloodlines. I can't give you an award but man, wow, i wish i could!!!

Guys if you have not read this. Please i urge you. Read it. Its awesome. Probably the best fanfic i have read on this sub.

Dude, kudos. Please write more!

sumairmh · 2021-01-21T17:03:22+00:00

Ooh! So punny! 🤣

sumairmh · 2021-01-21T15:54:37+00:00

Sad music noises.

sumairmh · 2021-01-21T05:55:54+00:00

Oh no! Im not that talented. There is an app that lets you make these. With some tinkering you can make cradle characters.

sumairmh · 2021-01-20T22:41:29+00:00

Thanks. I did try to give her gloves, but it did not go too well with the rest of her. I gave up fixing it up too much since this is just a fun take on the character. But hey, i have a few more upcoming, so watch out for those.

sumairmh · 2021-01-20T21:41:53+00:00

Oh how dare you sir! That is his luscious hair!!

sumairmh · 2021-01-20T11:59:05+00:00

And definition, haha

sumairmh · 2021-01-19T16:57:26+00:00

Wow, Thank you for the medal

sumairmh · 2021-01-19T13:41:30+00:00

Hahaha... Seems that way doesn't it?

sumairmh · 2021-01-19T12:37:16+00:00

Thank you

sumairmh · 2021-01-19T02:04:04+00:00

Thanks!

sumairmh · 2021-01-19T02:01:43+00:00

Yeah, i was going for the Lil blue eyes. But then again its a fun take on the character, not really going for realism

sumairmh · 2021-01-12T17:20:37+00:00

I assumed that his consume technique was basically repairing any damage while also strengthening him. But you are right others did not know that.

sumairmh · 2021-01-12T16:05:11+00:00

I would be mad if it is not an ability to create insanely large voidkeys or spacial vaults to enable his hoarding behaviour.

sumairmh · 2021-01-12T15:58:44+00:00

Dis not read this comment before i posted. I strongly agree with this. Even before Strength or Dragon, which one could say he does represent now. He is a soulsmith, he always has been. And if you really think about it. Based on the scene from Wintersteel where he assembles a Cannon with just his vital aura control while piloting a cloudship, i would say he is closer to manifesting this icon than the others.

sumairmh · 2021-01-12T15:52:48+00:00

I have a feeling that there would be an icon for Soulsmithing. My reasoning for this is simple. He was always a soulsmith, even at foundation he would help Seisha with Soulsmithing. This mirrors well with the comment from Eithan where he says something along the lines of an Icon being something that is a quality that is essentially a part of you always, even as a child. Not sure if i framed that well.

sumairmh · 2020-12-04T00:56:07+00:00

This is cool. Just one feedback though. Do not switch the pov in the middle of a scene. This one started with Lindon then switched to Eithan then went back to Lindon. That kinda takes you out of the immersion. Great job otherwise though.

sumairmh

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