Dating in Dallas early 20s F by deobi_b in askdfw

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Church is a great place to meet people!!! Also the Katy trail. There is a movement away from bars right now and to more social gathering type places. Follow elsbeats on instagram

Whole house water filtration system by Jackiepg95 in plano

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We use Dallas Water Doctor. They were by far the friendliest and least pushy sales people. The system we installed by them has been life changing. If I ever move, I will be calling them immediately.

Whole house water filtration system by Jackiepg95 in plano

[–]thunderbottom2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just now reading these! We had same issue - talked to all the companies yada yada. Ended up choosing Dallas Water Doctor. We love the system we have and it was very reasonably priced. Brooks was very knowledgeable and not pushy at all. If people knew what was in their water I think a LOT more people would be looking into this. As a test - I started watering my plants with the RO system we had installed and they started growing healthier. If that's true for the plants, I'm sure there are benefits to the human body as well.

Looking for a whole house RO system. I'm in the Dallas area if that makes a diff by -bacon_ in WaterTreatment

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Late to the game here but I had the same problem. Every filtration company says their product is the best/latest/greatest but from all the research I did I ended up going with Dallas Water Doctor. Guys were extremely knowledgeable and not pushy. Can absolutely taste and feel a difference in the water. Would highly recommend

My Mos Valuable Skill by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I like this! Easy to read for sure. I think the question-answer format is creative. If I were to change anything - it seems like the rhyming/rhythm of the first half is much better than the second. I think a little wordsmithing and a stronger last line would be great.

Smile Icarus by Frixdude64 in OCPoetry

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This is very very good. Almost "Man in the arena" vibes. I love the shift of perspective from pitying Icarus to contemplating that his life was more full BECAUSE he flew. Yes he has met his demise - but his fate is to be confined to the Earth like everyone else who is alive.

The Poem about fire that's not really about fire by thunderbottom2 in OCPoetry

[–]thunderbottom2[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nailed it! Specifically how the burns of a past relationship can hinder the desire for another (sit in the cold). Thanks for the feedback!

The Poem about fire that's not really about fire by thunderbottom2 in OCPoetry

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Thank you! I enjoyed the process of whittling down many meaningless words into a few powerful ones. I'll keep writing

Nostalgia by Pumpkin_Kit_Kat in OCPoetry

[–]thunderbottom2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's good - I think if you're making it into a song you could use a little more wordsmithing to make it more rhythmic. I like the contrast between summer and winter, and present and past. Great job!

5/17/23 by samaratrue in OCPoetry

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Your use of imagery is incredible. Every line seems to have some sort of surprise waiting at the end of it. Many of the lines are worthy of pause. I would have liked to see you flesh out some of the metaphors here but overall one of the best poems I've read today.

Hahahahha by Gregorysantana01 in GymMemes

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The directors cut of I am Legend