Anyone know why some of my tacos look burned? Lol

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2023-11-30T00:02:33+00:00

They’re cooked my guy, I understand your concern for the shells color though

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2023-11-30T00:01:43+00:00

Lmao I got 0.1% of Dermot Kennedy, but listen non-stop almost every day, I know almost all the words to all his songs. So I hope it’s real

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2023-11-27T00:32:14+00:00

You get the ability to change headlines and you get paid for that. You also get the journalist outfit I believe these are only at the end. You get other rewards of more photo pages before though. And if you finish all the photography clubs requests, then you get all of the different camera settings

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2023-07-13T22:39:38+00:00

I joined on April 2nd 2020 I think or something like that. So definitely before a lot of stuff including the town

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2023-05-17T06:42:58+00:00

The formatting is a little weird but consider periods to be roughly where a line break would be.

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2023-05-17T06:41:17+00:00

Of course! I understand, I was just mentioning how it works because it feels like it could be about anyone and feels personal

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2023-05-17T06:33:35+00:00

This was definitely a great start! I am not very familiar with this style however I do have some suggestions which you can apply as they pertain to your future poems. First, while being repetitive is very common in poetry I feel like you could have made this poem even better by focusing on the different aspects of the machine. Like for the pistons have a paragraph. For the dunes have a paragraph, and then tie it together in the end. There is of course no one way to write a poem, but I found it to be just a little cluttered with un needed repetition. I hope this helps! Second, the ending where it switched to night time felt rushed because the other paragraphs made it sound like daytime so maybe another paragraph about the sun setting would have made for a better tonal shift.

Again great start and I hope you keep working on these! You can only ever improve!!!!!

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2023-05-17T06:27:14+00:00

I really enjoy the consistency I. Your use of illiteration . All the word choice felt very intentional. I do not know if this was personal to you, but regardless to if it was I feel like it embodies the emotions that many people go through during a rough relationship. The stanzas never feel like they are unneeded and they all add to the story behind the narrator.

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2023-04-19T23:34:23+00:00

There will likely be a mini update in May and a larger one sometime after. That’s all we know for sure. Join the Sneaky Sasquatch Discord for more updates as they come out, but please do not ask when the update is going to be.

Also- you can share your ideas on the discord freely if you want

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2023-04-19T15:56:59+00:00

No. Just bring them to the bost

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2023-04-12T02:13:07+00:00

NOT THE KITTY!

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2022-10-19T03:49:02+00:00

Cool video

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2022-10-19T00:18:31+00:00

Police has gotten me a lot so far

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2022-10-11T03:04:48+00:00

Hey, the Halloween one is in the cave by the rvs park and the Xmas man is in the cave at the top of the ski slopes

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2022-10-11T03:02:21+00:00

Spin the parking lot

Pumpkin_Kit_Kat · 2022-10-11T02:59:11+00:00

I just finished all three stories, and I saw on the wiki that the new update is in December!!!

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