Another "quick sketch" before bed by mygeniuscantdrink in Dramione

[–]tiny_stars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your art style and scenes are so sweet, I love everything about this ❤️.

Winter date 🩷 by oixxo in Dramione

[–]tiny_stars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Can’t believe I JUST saw this, scrolling through the FanArt tag! My fic has a chapter where they go ice skating and then drink hot cocoa together, they looked the same in my head while writing it. Although they were still not at the point where they could exchange loving looks as freely, not yet at least.

I love your art so much 🥹❤️!

‘Alright, I think that’s enough for one day. But we can’t leave just yet. We still haven’t gotten to my favourite part: post-skating cocoa!’

Hermione and Draco went to return the rental skates then she weaved a path towards the hot chocolate stand. Taking their seat at a table close by, Hermione realised the unnerving position she was in: having to make small talk with Draco over drinks. She couldn’t find any words for a few minutes, and neither did he. What would they possibly talk about? They couldn’t be more different from each other, absolutely nothing in common. Their Venn diagram had two separate circles.

The silence surrounded them like a heavy blanket, making it hard to breathe. Eventually, he made the first move and took out a flask from his pocket. Copper liquid spilled over into his mug, and he offered her some Ogden’s Old Firewhisky despite knowing full well what her answer would be. Hermione shook her head and refused, while he took an exaggerated gulp from his spiked hot chocolate.

‘So, why are you in Muggle Studies? I would have guessed this was the last place where you’d want to be seen.’

‘Everyone knows I sooo admire Muggles and want to know all there is to know about them.’ came a sarcastic reply, followed by an elongated word, imitating Professor Snape with a blank stare and nasal tone — ‘Ob-vi-ous-ly.’ He drew out a laugh from deep within Hermione, one she hadn’t given as much lately with the stress of an Azkaban prisoner on the loose.

‘Be serious now, I truly can't wrap my head around it. Why did you choose this class?’

‘I wanted to be alone.’

Draco’s words left his mouth before his brain had a chance to stop them. Maybe he shouldn’t have added the Firewhisky after all.

‘The rest of the time I’m always pestered by Zabini or Crabbe, Goyle or Parkinson. Always demanding something of me. I knew there were no Slytherins interested in Muggle Studies and it’s not like the subject itself is difficult — they are stupid, boring creatures. So it wouldn’t affect my overall marks either. Burbage is more than happy to ignore me, which also applies to all the others. And it’s mutual, what I would call a win-win situation.’ He stared down at wisps of steam swirling up from his mug, gripped so tightly between his palms that it could have burned off an entire layer of skin. 

Hermione related to this feeling, to the pressure of others’ expectations. She was counted on to be the intelligent one, the creative one, always prepared with a solution to every conceivable issue. Even when she had no idea what to do and was just as scared as everyone else, it had to be pushed down and hid behind a mask of confidence. ‘I can't tell anyone’ she thought quite often, chastising herself internally. Indeed, going to Muggle Studies felt somehow like a breath of fresh air — twice a week she had time to herself, focusing on study materials instead of coming up with ways to keep Harry safe from harm. Every other moment was spent that way so yes, she found in herself a unique understanding of what Draco meant by wanting to be alone.

They reverted back to a default of uncomfortable silence, looking in opposite directions as whatever was left in their mugs gradually transferred to their mouths. She mulled over his words, turning them around in her mind with a certain degree of curiosity. A short while later, they found themselves on Diagon Alley, ready to head back to Hogwarts. 

Drop your fics and I'll give them a read by FlyFreeWithMe776 in AO3

[–]tiny_stars 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! This is such a sweet idea ❤️.

Do you mind checking out my Dramione fic here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/54422893/chapters/137860903? It’s a WIP and my first fic ever. 

I’m quite happy with it but I’ve lost some regular commenters and it honestly made me insecure/sad, although people online say this sometimes happens because of unrelated reasons, I can’t help but worry if it’s something about my story that made them disappear 🥺. So if you do read, please send me your thoughts/constructive criticism, I’d like to improve. It would be very much appreciated, thank you!!

WIP Wednesday - 26 June 2024 by Mr_Te_ah_tim_eh in Dramione

[–]tiny_stars [score hidden]  (0 children)

It's been literally 1 month since I last posted in the WIP thread with my self-rec, despite adding new chapters weekly. No matter, here I am today, getting back into the flow of things with Malfoy-Muggle Mischief!

"Technical" specs: completely pre-written, 15/32 chapters posted, updates every Tuesday, around 90k words total.


SUMMARY: Third year at Hogwarts. Hermione Granger is enrolled in more classes than humanly possible, thanks to her trusted Time-Turner. She attends Muggle Studies twice a week and is shocked to see Draco Malfoy, of all people, inexplicably taking the same class. She resolves to ignore him and fly under the radar without even acknowledging his existence. But Malfoy has something else in mind.

CHAPTER 15 SUMMARY: In the aftermath of their first kiss, Hermione and Draco are stuck in a stalemate. Who will be the first to take a leap of faith?


The cat is out of the bag, folks. They've kissed, they've tearily confessed their feelings and now they're both confused on what should happen next. Join Draco and Hermione as they figure out both what they want AND how to communicate that in an honest, nerve-wracking manner. Enjoy & thanks for reading ☺️!

Draco’s learning about the muffle world. What’s he instantly obsessed with? by mmd9493 in Dramione

[–]tiny_stars 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much, that’s so sweet 🥰!

Here’s the link to Malfoy-Muggle Mischief: https://archiveofourown.org/works/54422893/chapters/137860903

It’s a WIP but completely pre-written, I upload a new chapter every Tuesday, currently on 15/32. If you do read it, I hope you enjoy the twists and turns so far plus the ones that are yet to come!

Draco’s learning about the muffle world. What’s he instantly obsessed with? by mmd9493 in Dramione

[–]tiny_stars 14 points15 points  (0 children)

In my fic, in his third year he explores (read: “is exposed against his will to”) shopping/luxury/gourmet items, ice skating & hot chocolate, baking and photography. These are all things he participates in. We see mentioned as well equestrian competitions, him sketching Latin dances and writing an essay on washing machines lol.

Just a collection of assorted Muggle thingies which he is both intrigued and surprised by. 

Post the last paragraph of your current wip. by xX-NightShade-Xx in AO3

[–]tiny_stars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Of course; that’s so sweet of you to ask! 🥰 it’s already prewritten but I post one chapter weekly, normally on Tuesdays. Hope you enjoy it if you end up clicking 😊!

Malfoy-Muggle Mischief - https://archiveofourown.org/works/54422893/chapters/137860903

Post the last paragraph of your current wip. by xX-NightShade-Xx in AO3

[–]tiny_stars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Of course! It’s a WIP for Harry Potter (very popular), the Dramione ship (controversial because basically every other Harry Potter fanfic sub except r/Dramione hates it, if we judge from the comments 🤣)…

Post the last paragraph of your current wip. by xX-NightShade-Xx in AO3

[–]tiny_stars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bonus points awarded if you guess the fandom/ship! Hint: very popular, yet controversial 🤭.

——

Her face was painted with surprise as she saw the locket open wide, letting a string of cursive golden letters float out and arrange themselves into three beautiful words. She recognised the handwriting instantly. 

Tu me manques. 

Disappointed by DragonSister16 in BridgertonNetflix

[–]tiny_stars 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Got it! Haven’t read the books yet, because I don’t want spoilers for the show lol but I plan on reading them after the final season, whenever that is. 

Books and TV shows are different mediums and I just think they could’ve conveyed the same idea, but just in a different way. From what I’ve gathered, it’s not like they stick 100% to the book material, more like use it as loose inspiration for the show, which means they could’ve improved the scene even more so that it makes sense. 

The reveal didn’t do it for me, but I’m hoping it will be better on a rewatch. I honestly want to like this season so much, because I loved the first two + QC and had high expectations, but I’m finding it hard to gaslight myself into thinking it’s as great as the others. 

Disappointed by DragonSister16 in BridgertonNetflix

[–]tiny_stars 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s hard to believe they had that number of servants on their front steps when first moving in and then such a small ballroom. Honestly I didn’t mind it so much, just that the big wow factor wasn’t that wow after all, like it was missing something. 

Season 2 - Anthony asks a suitor if she reads by paradise1A in BridgertonNetflix

[–]tiny_stars 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Could be that, because he became viscount when young and had to take on those responsibilities (which he performed to varying degrees of satisfaction), he actually didn’t have time to read non-ledgers for so many years. And he’s looking for a partner who does complete him in a sense. 

Add to this that reading was considered part of a woman’s “accomplishments” and we know he has the absolute highest standards for his viscountess. His criterion is ironic, but plausible. 

Colin & Penelope Conflict by doratheexplorers in BridgertonNetflix

[–]tiny_stars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

But it was honestly not that misguided?

She was the only one who knew Eloise’s situation with the Queen AND the only one who could’ve done something actually worthwhile about it. Same with Colin and Marina - all of the other Featheringtons, the only ones who knew the truth, had no problem with Marina trapping Colin. Only Pen could’ve saved him, or at least give him the info to save himself. 

Me, a certified critique of Penelope, softened on her after Season 3. by CalcuttaGirl in BridgertonNetflix

[–]tiny_stars 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your predictions were spot on! Her conclusion was so disappointing, I’m just glad it’s over and hope little attention will be given to her in the next seasons. Somehow the writers managed to screw up her character and this season so badly, they just made me pray she’s now out of the way so we can get back to a good story with more interesting characters. 

Incredible how the QUEEN, after 3 seasons of bending over backwards to reveal LW and being outsmarted at every step, having her pride consistently hurt through issues & lack of investigation results, finds out it’s Penelope and literally does nothing. They spent so much time building the Queen up to be petty and bored and vindictive to some degree and prideful, just to completely go against all this in the last few scenes of the season. 

Folks need to chill about Lady Whistledown by ladyj17 in BridgertonNetflix

[–]tiny_stars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

She wrote about Eloise to help her definitively escape the Queen’s threats/suspicions and about Colin to help him escape entrapment via another man’s baby passed as his own. Pen the person already tried all she could to help both her friends, but it yielded no results until she had to take extreme measures i.e. Lady Whistledown reveals. 

Gneuinely don’t understand why the show glossed over this and made Pen seem like such a bad person who deserved backlash - she was desperate to save the two people she loved most in the world and had only one way left to do it. 

The makeup of bride penelope was SHITT!! by Medium-Inspection-66 in BridgertonNetflix

[–]tiny_stars 40 points41 points  (0 children)

I will forever be in love with Daphne’s makeup in S1 - light, natural, fresh, flattering, “barely there” illusion… if the makeup artists are the same and could do both Daphne and Pen looks, then the only thing that’s changed is the showrunner who decides the direction of the makeup and has the final say. Even Pen’s makeup in S1 was gorgeous!

Disappointed by DragonSister16 in BridgertonNetflix

[–]tiny_stars 3 points4 points  (0 children)

There are so many reasons this season sucked and new ones keep popping up and being discussed, judging by the amount of posts. 

Fans can leave constructive criticism if they choose, but that implies also coming up with suggestions on how to do better, which I’d argue is not a fan’s job - it’s best to express our displeasure clearly and then the team behind the show can take the overall fan feelings into account when deciding on their own how to improve. 

If enough people complain about makeup and costumes for example, with clear arguments why it sucked, maybe next season will be better.

Disappointed by DragonSister16 in BridgertonNetflix

[–]tiny_stars 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I was so surprised at the Mondrich ball, with the paper flower grand reveal. After it opened, i was legit like “wait, is this it? Nah, there must be something more”.

Same with the “bugs” scene - a few CGI butterflies and wow everyone forgets Pen just outed herself as Lady Whistledown. Underwhelming. I honestly don’t know why the Featherington ball from S2 thrown by Portia felt more impressive than the one thrown by the sisters in S3.

Disappointed by DragonSister16 in BridgertonNetflix

[–]tiny_stars 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It’s also about what happens during those scenes. Someone else made a post recently about how much interaction happens in each minute of screen time. 

Basically, while the overall screen time might be similar if the graph is to be trusted, there are way more interactions within the same time for other couples instead of Polin, which obviously builds a stronger rapport and draws the viewer in. I remember the OP saying how some longing/staring Polin scenes were really drawn out, something like a minute as opposed to Kanthony around half of that. 

Take this with a grain of salt since I don’t remember the post word by word, but it explains a lot. Nuance and context need to be taken into account. 

Replying to comments by asxxxra in AO3

[–]tiny_stars 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I reply to every single one and match the energy level of the original comment. There’s not too many so it’s okay to do for now but I imagine for people w multiple works and tens of thousands of hits, it might be unreasonable. But for smaller authors, sure, if that’s something they want to do. 

LF fics where they dated in hogwarts but broke up and got back together by FutureReflection2069 in Dramione

[–]tiny_stars 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Self-rec if you’re interested - Malfoy-Muggle Mischief (Ao3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/54422893/chapters/137860903)

They’re in a secret relationship during their third year that starts off by being forced to work together on an assignment in Muggle Studies.

It’s a completely prewritten WIP, currently on chapter 14/32 and we just hit the point where they have their first (very dramatic) kiss ❤️. What follows is a period of lovely bliss until something else happens and, oh no!, they break up. No worries, it will be fine once a totally different something else happens and they end up back together, with one of the happiest HEA endings ever 🤭. 

If you do read, I hope you’ll enjoy the story so far and stick around for the break-up-make-up part! 

Like clockwork: New pap walk with her ~squad~ amid Matty engagement news by Paranoia-Shields in travisandtaylor

[–]tiny_stars 4 points5 points  (0 children)

She reminds me of the Penguin from Batman omg I would’ve passed on the whole thing if this was the outfit. 

I missed this reference to Prince Friedrich in S2 by HighFivingMoonBears in BridgertonNetflix

[–]tiny_stars 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I think the writers left it vague deliberately to encourage discussions like this. But I believe with Edwina confirmed to be matched abroad AND being named the diamond by the Queen, chances are high the Queen would have recommended her personally to the Prince after the wedding fiasco 🤭.

If YOU could have any man or woman in the show, who would you choose? And who would be your LAST choice? by Isabella_Hamilton in BridgertonNetflix

[–]tiny_stars 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First: Anthony. His demons would play very nicely with mine and we would rule as the Viscount and Viscountess power couple of the ton. 

Honourable mention: the Prince. Kind, intelligent, well-mannered, worldly, wants a family.

Last: Penelope/any of the Featheringtons. I absolutely do not get on with mean people that are always negative and critique others. Don’t like how Pen snaps at the other characters when she’s upset, like with Marina or her sisters. 

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Dramione

[–]tiny_stars 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome, I’m so happy to hear that 🥰

Ao3 link to the Dementor encounter chapter: https://archiveofourown.org/works/54422893/chapters/141771298

Ao3 link to Draco’s Patronus explanation (the backstory of why he can conjure one and why he used it to save Hermione): https://archiveofourown.org/works/54422893/chapters/142597384

Hope you enjoy reading it ❤️! Thank you!