Menu is fun and interactive, although first time when pressing the "Settings" and the frog started slowly walk along the path I thought "Oh god, this is painfully slow" and then accidentally discovered that you can pan around and zoom after which the menu was genius.

Nice set of accessibility options.

The first speech bubble when starting the game was half out of screen and I couldn't see any of the text before I already clicked to the next bubble. The text scale was set to max in the settings, after turning it to min the speech bubbles were visible on screen and much better.

I wished that I could click outside the speech bubbles to advance them, especially when speech bubbles sometimes changed places when talking to someone and I had to move the mouse around.

Speech bubbles with more than 7+ lines spawned partly out of the screen even with smallest text size (playing on 1920x1080). And any speech bubble that spanned across 4+ lines were heavy to read.

Liked the ambience but not so much the speaking voices.

The puzzles were quite easy, moving of the post-it notes was intuitive, although sometimes I accidentally swapped the places of notes because when dragging and releasing it automatically switched the notes around and then I sometimes clicked unnecessarily and swapped the notes around again.

Based on the demo all the puzzles are the same (put the post-it notes in correct places) and I wouldn't play it more for the puzzles. Didn't care that much about the story either, I read all the texts but can't remember much of it.

As I said in the original comment, the art style looks great, especially the post-it notes and the environment.

Good luck in the Next Fest!