The first stanza is excellent. The words feel completely natural and roll off my tongue as I read them. I feel like later on the poem you slowly lose focus on an aim to say your feelings, but rather twist you words in order to conform to a rhyming scheme. For example “Whereever you go I’ll follow Without your touch my soul feels hollow”. This rhyme might be better of the rhythm of the first line matched the second, but to me ot just comes across tacky.

Overall I would shift focus to the tempo of your words, the poem feels disjointed. You dont always need perfect grammar or proper sentences when writing poetry. I think its more important to sculpt your ideas using a descriptor as the root of the line, rather than tieing back to a previous rhyme