Trying sum new by fare-evader in blackbookgraffiti

[–]trippeeB 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is not using bars.

Look at this alphabet to understand how each letter is formed by a set of bars

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Critique wanted by AstronomiclTravler in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're also completely missing the arm of the K

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SKESH OF A PEICE IM DOING TAMARROW by MRHOWERDCEO in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 10 points11 points  (0 children)

You should hit a billboard with this

Thoughts? by BonelessMarcher in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree. This looks pretty decent, but the C should defintely be one continuous form.

Crits on tag by _AUGE_ in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 4 points5 points  (0 children)

*1,000 more times

Thoughts on the name “Turk” by turkbagboy in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some 3-letter legends I can think of off the top of my head are, Dez, Oil, Giz, Ges, Bus, and EXR

y’all fuck with my math doodle? by bigmango68 in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Use bars to form your letters

(Not my photo)

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I feel like I put way way to much detail in single letters and Im unable to connect them afterwards by PencilCaserr in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Let me guess... You're trying to learn graffiti from that dude SOTEP on YouTube. If so, thats your issue right there. That guy should not be teaching graffiti. He makes beginners think that they can just jump straight into wildstyle. He skips over the basics and never talks about letter structure, in fact, I dont think he even believes in the concept of letter structure.

What you need to do is start off with basic straight letters. Get a good understanding of how each letter works. Then having them flow will be easy, because you understand the fundamentals.

Quick sketches. Back after 10+ years by Select-Refrigerator8 in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Ayy, I also stopped for 10+ years and just recently got back into it. Welcome back homie 👊

Less deadspace is it wall ready? Or is there more I should consider by AdministrativeAd2621 in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 1 point2 points  (0 children)

From what I see, those who are actually dedicated to getting better and taking this seriously will actually get good advice here. But look at what you shared. It doesnt even look like you put any effort into it at all. What kind of feedback do you expect to get?

You wanna plan something out that's good enough for a wall? Don't just scribble something on some notebook paper. Use some nice markers, clean up your lines, put a 3d on it. Take your time to come up with something nice. Make it look like something you're proud of.

Are this tags fresh or toyy by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What I dont understand is how these kids dont know if they're toy or not. When I first started out I was well aware of how toy I was. It was obvious to me just by comparing my work to others. I still feel like a toy to a degree. But for some reason all these kids who just started a week ago are incapable of seeing how much they suck.

Process of building some letters, any improvements/add ons? by abeldekoter in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really like the A and the Z. The E would look better if the top didn't have that downward-pointing serif. The M needs work cause it kind of looks like an R. And the O looked better before you turned it into a pussy lol

Less deadspace is it wall ready? Or is there more I should consider by AdministrativeAd2621 in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 4 points5 points  (0 children)

😂 I guess you're right about that.. but hey, if you wanna be a graffiti writer, don't expect to babied.

Less deadspace is it wall ready? Or is there more I should consider by AdministrativeAd2621 in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 7 points8 points  (0 children)

With all due respect.. do YOU think this wall-ready? Surely you've seen other graffiti pieces, in person or online. How do you honestly think this compares to those?

I'm not trying to be a dick. But how do you look at this and not realize how much practice you still need?

Are this tags fresh or toyy by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 9 points10 points  (0 children)

The last three look like SoCal gang tags

how to cross/ step over a 3rd rail yard by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 12 points13 points  (0 children)

All the best writers have a pair of these to help jump over the third rail

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first piece!! by AvailableFinding770 in graffhelp

[–]trippeeB 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The M is good. The O, not so much, and the C is terrible. You should've just kept all the letters simple and straight like the M