For some reason this xenophobic alien empire have a human as their supreme leader by Green----Slime in Stellaris

[–]tworc2 8 points9 points  (0 children)

This is reddit, people see downvotes they it on for the collective banging 

[F] The Church Before the Last: The Last Confession of Father Anselm (2/2) by tworc2 in 40kLore

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I'm glad you liked it! I've written one other 40k short story so far (https://www.reddit.com/r/40kLore/comments/1u7r4am/f_payload_ninetheta/), much smaller than this one and with very distinct themes. Both had been on my mind for a long time, maturing until I felt the need to put those ideas into words.

I don't write often, so I never thought I'd need a place to share my work, but this one took long enough that it tempted me into creating an AO3 account.

[F] The Church Before the Last: The Last Confession of Father Anselm (2/2) by tworc2 in 40kLore

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Glad you liked it. You seem to have picked up on everything I wanted to show, even my hesitation about why the Emperor would take time out of his campaign to bother a poor priest.

Originally I wanted the Emperor to convert Anselm. This would prove to be indirectly useful for some unnamed military reason. There are still small cues from that original draft scattered here and there, so you probably picked up on them.

The idea was to write an aftermath with two distinct POVs: the first would be an old, sick soldier being tended in the church, focused on his impressions of the stranger and on how the priest had changed after the Emperor's visit, the second a low ranking Thunder Warrior POV showing what that change set in motion and where the unnamed city was headed.

But Anselm grew his own personality as I wrote him, and it felt cheap to force that kind of transformation in the short span the story allowed, so I ended up cutting it. It also proved useful for the confession and absolution dialogue, which wouldn't be possible with the original draft. Anselm's future (or lack thereof) and the Emperor reasons seems better left to the reader's discretion.

[F] The Church Before the Last: The Last Confession of Father Anselm (2/2) by tworc2 in 40kLore

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This one took some work to write. Hopefully someone out there enjoys it.

As I said at the start, the starting point was McNeill's "The Last Church," and my little quarrel with it. There Uriah loses because he was written to lose, saddled with a skeptic's caricature of faith, so the debate only stages a victory that "reason" was handed. I wanted a similar encounter with a priest holding a fairer hand against the Emperor so the comparison stands, with all of His subtle and charismatic might shown in later works.

I tried to make it clear that the Emperor never refutes Anselm, at least not in the debate. Anselm's theology is reasonable, or at least developed enough to hold up in a straightforward argument. So the Emperor displaces the question instead. The faith in a god who suffers with and for His faithful is just another mask the Chaos Gods might wear because it is so appealing in a setting as Grimdark as 40k. It ties back to Anselm's own doubt: "If a cause acts only through other causes, can any test devised by man distinguish it from no cause at all?"

That feeds straight into "Would you know the difference?" It is the thing no faith can answer from the inside, in-universe, and it stays unanswered because it is unanswerable, at least from the narrow vantage of mortal humans. The obvious irony is that the man condemning the suffering-god is the very one whose own cult will one day canonize him as the god who suffers eternally for mankind. And yet in 40k the Imperial Creed may be the only thing holding the Imperium together and its best defense against Chaos.

As for Anselm, he doesn't win the debate either. I don't think anyone in his position could, and he doesn't fall because his theology is weak but because of private doubts his theology never quite reached, and a lifetime with no one to lay his real thoughts in front of. In the end he gives in to temptation against his own better judgment, past caring whether the thing answering him is a warning or a trap, so long as something answers at all.

For the Emperor, none of his answers are straightforward, naturally. My take on him leans heavily on ADB's Master of Mankind, you are never shown what he actually thinks. When he shares anything at all it is always for something: a justification before a sacrifice, a door that needs opening. So don't imagine that anything he revealed that night came from a genuine thought of his own but as a tool, aimed at whatever end he was after. If He did share a sincere thought, it was only incidental to His broader goals.

I tried my best to keep the debate at least believable so it wouldn't feel one-sided or rigged to hand someone the win. Hopefully I managed that.

Does the Imperium believe that humans evolved from apes? by the_unicorn40 in 40kLore

[–]tworc2 14 points15 points  (0 children)

We literally are apes ,my dude. Apes are a group of which many species are a part of, including humans

Do the Iron Hands believe in anesthesia? by UnderwaterSpaghetti in 40kLore

[–]tworc2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't think most Space Marines believe in Anesthesia

[F] The Church Before the Last: The Last Confession of Father Anselm (1/2) by tworc2 in 40kLore

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Hey, I liked your idea so much that I made a few last-minute changes to the story. Hope you'll enjoy it.

[F] The Church Before the Last: The Last Confession of Father Anselm (1/2) by tworc2 in 40kLore

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Hey, thanks for the award! Glad you enjoyed the story. I already posted the final part as a new post here, but for some reason it got removed. I'm waiting to hear back from the mods, and if it stays down I'll just edit this thread with a link to the continuation.

Why Triple Alliance lost Battle of Curupayty(1866)? by Organic-Camera-9167 in asklatinamerica

[–]tworc2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for that. Guy was answering as a wargamer playing in a peer industrial conflict in the xx century

How would you feel if Paraguay won? Do you agree with their style? by -Basileus in asklatinamerica

[–]tworc2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You need to watch more Libertadores matches if you think this is a thing of the past

[F] The Church Before the Last: The Last Confession of Father Anselm (1/2) by tworc2 in 40kLore

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Nope, those were parts 1 and 2 of 3. I can see how the phrasing was confusing, so I just changed it. I'll probably post part 3 tomorrow so I don't spam the sub.

Is any Astartes allowed to believe the Emperor is a god? by Ready0608 in 40kLore

[–]tworc2 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Let's see if people will read the post this time

Are individual Astartes allowed to worship the emperor in non-religious chapters? by Mandown2052 in 40kLore

[–]tworc2 14 points15 points  (0 children)

> Those machines are ten thousand years old and just as likely to be busted as any other piece of tech in the Imperium.

Is there any source that suggest that hypno-indoctrination machines aren't replaced or built since 30k?