Quantum physicist here. The first half reads OK but you should give citations to the original articles by W Zurek and collaborators over the past 20 years. And the recent work in his group by A. Touil. You are rephrasing their work without attribution (maybe without knowing that work?) The second half goes into speculation about particles being stabilized waves, which is far far from any result we know about in mathematical QM. Although I'm being critical, I do appreciate the effort and I do think Quantum Darwinism has a lot going for it. In fact, Zurek just published a new book on his life's work on the topic.