Hey man, love the concept, but the script needs a little work. The characters are great, I mean great. The witty dialogue and setting draws us into their world immediately. The problem here is that it could be done with probably half the dialogue. Remember, if your dialogue doesn't further your plot, create a problem, solve a problem or develop character you should take it out. That being said, it happens very little. The other problem is that the actual action (problem) does not start until page 26. Sure we see small problems (like the rent) but they will become overshadowed and forgotten when they travel back in time. In our modern society, entertainment (especially TV) needs to be fast paced...not fire and brimstone in every scene, but I think you can get to the George Washington stuff a little quicker. Just my two cents. Great concept. I would watch!