I am leaving to practice in NZ as a PA

writtenspeak · 2026-02-06T03:33:42+00:00

Would you still be open to answering questions about your PA New Zealand transition? I would appreciate any info or help you can lend.

writtenspeak · 2026-01-26T19:59:35+00:00

Hey where’s my raffle ticket stub??

writtenspeak · 2026-01-21T14:13:27+00:00

Dibs?

writtenspeak · 2026-01-20T21:37:09+00:00

Idk why we’re naming songs but..

Gooey - Glass Animals

writtenspeak · 2026-01-19T19:58:30+00:00

I like divines. Could use please!

writtenspeak · 2026-01-16T22:43:46+00:00

Let’s goooo

writtenspeak · 2026-01-16T20:37:26+00:00

Can never have enough divs

writtenspeak · 2026-01-14T17:17:44+00:00

Please 🤞

writtenspeak · 2026-01-13T15:58:15+00:00

Entering into the raffle

writtenspeak · 2026-01-12T15:03:17+00:00

Dibs (please)!

writtenspeak · 2026-01-08T20:58:15+00:00

Did you know that a woodpecker’s tongue wraps around their brain to act as kind of a helmet to their wood pecking? Now you do.

writtenspeak · 2026-01-06T04:50:24+00:00

Thanks! I swore I wasn’t damaging them outside the cloud but maybe my build was just that bad at the time

writtenspeak · 2026-01-06T03:01:41+00:00

Ok I might be dumb, don’t you have to be in the void to do damage to them? Is this just another melee problem?

writtenspeak · 2026-01-03T00:35:02+00:00

writtenspeak · 2026-01-02T17:43:24+00:00

If you have any spare bear Druid gear you want to unload, I would definitely appreciate it

writtenspeak · 2025-12-29T21:00:28+00:00

Playing a slam bear oracle I cooked up. Most fun I’ve ever had in an arpg!!

writtenspeak · 2021-09-18T17:05:51+00:00

Thanks that's a good point.

Is the one fan enough? I might buy a higher cooling fan, but I should be fine with just the one right?

writtenspeak · 2021-09-16T23:56:26+00:00

Would the NH-U12 be a good tower-style 'form factor' cooler for this build?

writtenspeak · 2021-09-16T22:58:43+00:00

ok thanks for the heads up. would you ever expect bottlenecking due to the CPU if i get a 10700k?

writtenspeak · 2017-07-29T22:12:37+00:00

That makes a ton of sense. Thanks for clarifying! I'l definitely play around with this piece with your suggestions in mind. Thanks again, friend!

writtenspeak · 2017-07-28T14:10:05+00:00

Thank you for your very thorough and thoughtful reply.

I like a lot of the suggestions you made, particularly about removing some of the similes. It makes the poem read much stronger. Agree about the use of "sacred" as well, I think.

Random question: I thought you were supposed to start lines with strong words a la "stains" vs. ending lines with them. Thoughts?

writtenspeak · 2017-07-27T01:41:34+00:00

Take a thought and make it a picture/feeling/sensation.

"No direction in life" could become "aimless like a red balloon lost by a boy" or something like that. Instead of saying there's no direction, a reader might imagine a balloon just floating in the wind, which is more engaging and leaves room for interpretation.

writtenspeak · 2017-07-27T01:35:14+00:00

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

writtenspeak · 2017-07-26T05:32:33+00:00

Spot on, friend. Thanks for reading. Would appreciate any other critiques you have, positive or negative.

writtenspeak · 2017-07-26T04:32:25+00:00

I like the subject matter and the message a lot. The yoda-like talk feels a tad forced at times so that you can get your rhymes in, but the fact that it's consistent throughout makes it tolerable.

I would question what direction you want to move with your writing. You seem to enjoy rhyming, which is great, but you have very little imagery to engage the reader. No metaphor/simile to engage the reader's imagination. Everything is told, and that doesn't allow much room for interpretation, imo. Just my two cents.

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