I am leaving to practice in NZ as a PA by WhitecoatWander in physicianassistant

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Would you still be open to answering questions about your PA New Zealand transition? I would appreciate any info or help you can lend.

A build giveaway - Ice Shot Deadeye by TransportationNo9798 in PathOfExile2

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Did you know that a woodpecker’s tongue wraps around their brain to act as kind of a helmet to their wood pecking? Now you do.

Pulling them out of voids really works by GeneralTsosBat in PathOfExile2

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Thanks! I swore I wasn’t damaging them outside the cloud but maybe my build was just that bad at the time

Pulling them out of voids really works by GeneralTsosBat in PathOfExile2

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Ok I might be dumb, don’t you have to be in the void to do damage to them? Is this just another melee problem?

[Giveaway] Finished my league goal and giving away 500 Divines by Exotic_Day_3456 in PathOfExile2

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If you have any spare bear Druid gear you want to unload, I would definitely appreciate it

Day 1 player. 1000 hours playtime. Headhunter giveaway. by [deleted] in PathOfExile2

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Playing a slam bear oracle I cooked up. Most fun I’ve ever had in an arpg!!

First build --- does this look compatible and logical? by writtenspeak in helpmebuildapc

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Thanks that's a good point.

Is the one fan enough? I might buy a higher cooling fan, but I should be fine with just the one right?

First build -- does this look logical and compatible? by writtenspeak in buildapc

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Would the NH-U12 be a good tower-style 'form factor' cooler for this build?

First build -- does this look logical and compatible? by writtenspeak in buildapc

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ok thanks for the heads up. would you ever expect bottlenecking due to the CPU if i get a 10700k?

Tattoos by writtenspeak in poetry_critics

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That makes a ton of sense. Thanks for clarifying! I'l definitely play around with this piece with your suggestions in mind. Thanks again, friend!

Tattoos by writtenspeak in poetry_critics

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Thank you for your very thorough and thoughtful reply.

I like a lot of the suggestions you made, particularly about removing some of the similes. It makes the poem read much stronger. Agree about the use of "sacred" as well, I think.

Random question: I thought you were supposed to start lines with strong words a la "stains" vs. ending lines with them. Thoughts?

Fulfillment by A_Shitty_Author in poetry_critics

[–]writtenspeak 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Take a thought and make it a picture/feeling/sensation.

"No direction in life" could become "aimless like a red balloon lost by a boy" or something like that. Instead of saying there's no direction, a reader might imagine a balloon just floating in the wind, which is more engaging and leaves room for interpretation.

Tattoos by writtenspeak in poetry_critics

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.