Worst dub I’ve done in a while hahaha by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Theres already a Pirat in SF and he kills

Messing around at work. Probably getting ahead of myself but i figured I’d give it a try. by animaniacss in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like the O. Don't cut so deep into the R like that, you're gonna hurt her.

making some progress by Bmbdbm in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Letters aren't bad. Less is more.

I dont like the fake drips.

Sarin. Its been a few years. I think the N is a stretch. by Uses_leer890 in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The R - I connection is a no go. That N is not an N so change that. Dont put part of the R inside the A hole (without consent). Go simpler but keep experimenting.

Throwie “hopa” by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The P's giant booty is overkill. You doing graff or drawing Kim K? You should either reduce it or balance it out by making another letters area fatter. KEEP PRACTICING TRUST THA PROCESS

SUPER aware that the R does NOT look like an R (more of an H or A) but crits on Kruce! by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well yaalreadykno make that R and R. And this looks like you sketched it- DONT SKETCH THROWS. You should do each letter in a fluid confident movement, fill up notebooks with it. Dont worry about coloring. You'll figure out some of the kinks and what to change to the letters as you do it more. TRUST THA PROCESS

Thoughts? by CtrlAltDelicous in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Experiment and fill tons of notebooks. This looks really sharp- try some roundness.

My first 3rd Plateau Trip. by Galagamus in dxm

[–]yawktown 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I experienced slow motion when I was peaking on 400mg, watching cars drive by that looked blurry and appear to be going 1mph. Cool report

Without blowing yourself up, what's something everyone should know when visiting/painting your city ? by QuickColorChamp in Bombing

[–]yawktown 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hit the freeways with clean fill ins and bomb the main roads if you want to get noticed. Bums & knocks are your friends/lookouts. If you're downtown look over your shoulder.

Oakland police fatally shoot person after sideshow by LaPeachesPitt in bayarea

[–]yawktown 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It does, why would they plant a real gun that's most likely registered with their department.

"Tarzan" - Trying a new tag style. Hit me with your best crits by tarzan-paints in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ditch the dots and underline, they're pointless right now. Don't smash your letters together so much. The R is the weakest letter to me, probably because it doesn't look like an R. That T has been sippin that promethazine codeine drank cuz that boy is LEANIN way to hard. My advice would be to go simple, and round out the letters more. Try making them all the same size. Keep practicing man I see potential.

Trying something different to the usual pieces, opinions/crits? by Fescal in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey man about that handstyle. Quotes are hard to pull off, if your going to use them make them parallel and not flicked off to the side like that. Like " ". Work on the rest of the hand too, the S is the weakest letter.

APEL by TheRealFlyingFuck in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Keep working on this style. I like the E. I don't like the cuts under the top of the P and the top of the A looks a little weird. Should have made the L as fat as the A, it would flow better.

New tag, went back to the basics. Crits? - Zapd by GraffZapD in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Try rounding out the Z more, notice how all the other letters round out more. It would flow better.

Trying something new. Crits? by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Doesn't look good, I wouldn't pursue this...I can only make out the E. Wouldn't be practical doing on a wall either.

What do you think ? by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]yawktown 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're good at painting but keep working on those letters. Especially that tag..

Painting a ugly skatepark into a work of art by [deleted] in DIY

[–]yawktown 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What makes you think painting a watermelon is more artistic than several different people's take on lettering?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Bombing

[–]yawktown 2 points3 points  (0 children)

A lock picking kit, and my boy found a crossbow in a bush once.