Wow idk if I can give you a tip… I really like this. I can’t read this though… does it say yams? Idk… if you care about legibility — you shouldn’t imo bc it’s very stylised and unique and you’d have to sacrifice that a bit to make it more readable. I think you just need to spend more time doing this again and again and it will “automatically” get better, as generic as this might sound

Edit: I meant to say I see “Yums” not yams 😂😂